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9/1/22, 7:42 AM
Thanks for this story its a good ending and leave us to our own imagination - really liked the way that Steve merged with Phil both being liberated

9/1/22, 6:05 PM
@MalSkin Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.
9/1/22, 5:40 PM
Shivering with anticipation for what's next...
9/1/22, 4:43 PM
OMG This was my fantasy 100%. I had a chance to be a hypnotized boy toy a few years ago but chickened out. I have tried to find that guy but he has gone. No trace of him. I have beat off to that memory many times. Just once I would love to escape my straight married life and try to other side. Thank you for an incredible story!
9/1/22, 4:39 PM
Incredibly well written and creative. One can tell you had fun with this one. Great job, Cockatrice!
Anonymous
9/1/22, 3:18 PM
Love this story so much, it's so hot. Can't wait to read the next chapter

9/1/22, 4:29 PM
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9/1/22, 7:27 AM
Yes! I've been waiting for the pup :grin: The "it's not grandma, is it?" made me laugh. The creativity of this story is incredible, and i'm hyped for the next chapter!

9/1/22, 4:13 PM
@Norismo Thank you Norismo for your kind words. I'm so glad it made you laugh, too. More to come, for sure!
Anonymous
9/1/22, 2:43 PM
The creativity is off the charts!
7/21/22, 5:49 PM
That was an interesting way of continuing this series, but the writing style.... The story keep switching from 3rd-person focused on Aaron, to omniscient 3rd person, to second-person to 3rd person focused on Lou and finish as some weird mix where I was struggling to understand who's POV if any we were following. Still good, but nowhere near as good as the first two chapters. =(

9/1/22, 2:12 PM
@BobbyBlobfish has completely right. I must admit his remarks
5/31/22, 3:49 AM
An incredible chapter! The balance between the drama of the baseball game and the aching pornographic content of the sex scene was perfect. You also do a great job reminding the audience that, while Luke DID use a horrible slur and broke Sammy’s heart, Sammy himself was rather deceptive and making assumptions (especially because this chapter continues to make it clear that Luke has absolutely NO ability to pick up on other people’s sexuality or desires unless it’s extremely explicit). It’s also interesting to see how this condition is literally changing Luke’s body…can’t wait to see what happens next! You are an incredible writer! :D

5/31/22, 10:39 AM
@Feed Your Head So I personally feel like Sammy wasn’t being deceptive at all. Taken from his point of view, it’s entirely reasonable to think that Sammy and Luke’s feelings were mutual. At worse it’s a breakdown in communication, but as well as Sammy knows Luke, he’s not a mind reader. It’s important to me that Sammy is shown in a good light, not as a bully or someone manipulative.

R P
5/31/22, 2:05 PM
@Charlie Walker I don’t think Sammy comes across as manipulative at all. He seems to be genuinely trying to talk with Luke about what they have going on in the previous chapter. At worst Sammy maybe seems a little too caught up in his own crush so that he hadn’t noticed the somewhat mixed signals he was getting from Luke.

5/31/22, 2:27 PM
@Charlie Walker Oh, oh. Don’t worry—Sammy is definitely NOT a bully, or even a manipulative person! I think, as R.P. said, the worst thing he did was get caught up in his feelings and make assumptions, which is something a lot of people do. My own interpretation of him as a little manipulative is purely my own baggage (I’m someone who has struggled with communication and boundaries between partners in the past). Plus with Luke as our POV character (and a well-written one at that), it’s natural that we might start assuming his perspective. Sammy is a great guy, and I hope that he and Luke reconcile! But to do that, Luke needs to start talking about things, and he seems to struggle with that…

9/1/22, 2:12 PM
@Charlie Walker I am pleased you said that & agree with you
Evan
5/31/22, 7:51 AM
I feel really bad for Sammy. I really hope Luke can wake up to himself and they can reconcile. Also hope he doesn't mind Luke being a huge butt slut. What a stellar sex scene. Just amazing! So damned hot the two of them. And their inability to be in control. I have my suspicions about Mark's cock. Perhaps he has his own curse he's contending with.

9/1/22, 2:10 PM
@Agree