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Jan 16, 2025
Anonymous
4/8/25, 4:00 PM
Please come back and write a part two, you can't just leave off on a cliffhanger like this :weary:
4/8/25, 2:56 PM
Very nice. As well as portrayed. Some spellingbissues. But that hairband. The story was great as can you easily fix the Grammer issues. But all in all. Very easy read as well as thank you for your efforts
4/8/25, 2:29 PM
Why aren't villains getting the Superman dick down dominated experience? lol
Anonymous
4/8/25, 1:53 PM
Thank you for another chapter of this it is my favorite of your stories!!! I hope for more soon ! Will lance get a wet willy and enjoy it?
4/5/25, 12:11 AM
Thanks for writing this! This provided some inspiration for a [similar ass expansion virus idea](https://bodybeyondstories.tumblr.com/post/779856123869167616/the-majority-of-cases-are-mild-1) that I've been playing around with, and also it's so well done. The writing and world building are great, but you also nail the public health critique in a really compelling way. Great work.

4/8/25, 12:11 PM
@[Body Beyond](/user/show/10059346) Thank you! Definitely interesting to see other takes on the concept. Ultimately this story is a bit of an homage to Ethan White's Bubble Boy Virus setting, which I would recommend if you want more.

4/8/25, 1:06 PM
@[Anonymous Fox](/user/show/308354) Ah, I hadn't heard of the BBV stories, thanks for the tip!
4/6/25, 3:15 PM
Looking forward to more of this!

4/8/25, 12:08 PM
@[TenjinsTree](/user/show/10018468) Ask and ye shall receive. New chapter is out and the one after that is already in development.
Zander
4/8/25, 1:55 AM
Good prologue, I hope the next chapters will be longer and will reveal the characters better, as well as the method of hypnosis of Danny and we will find out how and when he began to control his brother Eric and why? It's only about sex or something else) I hope the next chapters will answer this question.

4/8/25, 12:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) The original story is at https://mcstories.com. It will answer all your questions about how Danny came to own Eric's ass.
4/8/25, 8:43 AM
Excellent story here -- I love the turnabout. The humiliation is very well woven into the story as well. I think I would have loved to have seen the scenes at the different tables at Shadows expanded more, though giving the tantalizing descriptions does let the reader take it further places.
Triplemeatpizza
4/1/25, 6:12 PM
I love it, it's strangely sad....

4/8/25, 8:36 AM
@Triplemeatpizza Thank you very much ! I'm glad you liked it, and you saw the emotional complexity I tried to put in that ^^
3/31/25, 8:59 AM
That was a really fascinating little story. it's rare to see one where a character changes twice like that. Very Flowers For Algernon.

4/8/25, 8:32 AM
@[d-boi](/user/show/10037283) Thank you ! I'm glad that idea resonated ! I didn't know about that story, but checking its synopsis, I see the resemblances ^^'