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8/28/22, 1:46 PM
i really really enjoyed it. So hot. it is just what I was wanting today. I am excited to read the next!
8/28/22, 1:23 PM
can't wait for the next part!
8/28/22, 11:04 AM
Not the typical BDSM story at all, but I really enjoyed reading it. More a BDSM community fantasy than an erotic one. I'd be interested in seeing more like this.
musclejunkie
8/28/22, 4:58 AM
I agree, the style and vibe of the stories he writes are so fucking hot/! i need more!

8/28/22, 11:00 AM
Hey. Thank you for taking the trouble to comment so few people do. It’s always good to get feedback. I will admit when I wrote this story I was in the “zone“. Check out my stuff on Amazon for the book in which the story appeared and gave the book its title. You might also like Commander Cody , Ace Lewis, and Grey Hawk’s Stripper Daze too. I was really in the “zone” when these were written.@musclejunkie
floetenspieler
8/23/22, 1:43 PM
i can't stop reading all these hot stories

8/28/22, 10:57 AM
Thanks@floetenspieler
8/28/22, 9:47 AM
Another fantastic chapter! I'm definitely hooked!

8/28/22, 10:48 AM
@Norismo Thanks again! I'll try not to disappoint!
8/28/22, 6:28 AM
This is very well written. I’m enjoying the world and fantasy you’ve created.

8/28/22, 10:46 AM
@Mrdick Thank you! I'm enjoying exploring it too!
8/28/22, 9:58 AM
The only qualm I have is that Freddy doesn't seem to have the mind to have the wishing rock duct taped to him 24/7 after Uri continuously steals it from him. He probably already figured out he can wish whatever he wants now - now that all he has to do is edge Freddy into agreement in order to get what he wants. I hope it goes the same way! If I had a kleptomaniac for a roommate, i would at least have all my valuables stored somewhere off-site, or in a heavy safe.
8/28/22, 6:37 AM
"Yet you, my creator, detest and spurn me, thy creature, to whom thou art bound by ties only dissoluble by the annihilation of one of us. You purpose to kill me. How dare you sport thus with life?" - Frankenstein's monster I can see a clear parallel to _(Frankenstein)_ if that's at all intentional. The creation rejected by it's creator, wishing to learn more about the world, ultimately hurting his creator. However, Frankenstein was rejected by society, while Jake seems to have circumvented it.
8/28/22, 1:18 AM
This was super sexy. Loved the characters and the design and the sex. Especially loved the rimming (so nice to get actual rimming with the rimming tag). Great story all around!

Kybal Lutra
8/28/22, 4:32 AM
@Heru Kane oh man, thank you so much! I’m a BIG fan of rimming (irl and in fiction haha) so it’s always a shame when stories kinda toe the line with that. I always try to incorporate it into my stories when I can (which is most of the time haha)