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8/28/22, 6:28 AM
This is very well written. I’m enjoying the world and fantasy you’ve created.

8/28/22, 10:46 AM
@Mrdick Thank you! I'm enjoying exploring it too!
8/28/22, 9:58 AM
The only qualm I have is that Freddy doesn't seem to have the mind to have the wishing rock duct taped to him 24/7 after Uri continuously steals it from him. He probably already figured out he can wish whatever he wants now - now that all he has to do is edge Freddy into agreement in order to get what he wants. I hope it goes the same way! If I had a kleptomaniac for a roommate, i would at least have all my valuables stored somewhere off-site, or in a heavy safe.
8/28/22, 6:37 AM
"Yet you, my creator, detest and spurn me, thy creature, to whom thou art bound by ties only dissoluble by the annihilation of one of us. You purpose to kill me. How dare you sport thus with life?" - Frankenstein's monster I can see a clear parallel to _(Frankenstein)_ if that's at all intentional. The creation rejected by it's creator, wishing to learn more about the world, ultimately hurting his creator. However, Frankenstein was rejected by society, while Jake seems to have circumvented it.
8/28/22, 1:18 AM
This was super sexy. Loved the characters and the design and the sex. Especially loved the rimming (so nice to get actual rimming with the rimming tag). Great story all around!

Kybal Lutra
8/28/22, 4:32 AM
@Heru Kane oh man, thank you so much! I’m a BIG fan of rimming (irl and in fiction haha) so it’s always a shame when stories kinda toe the line with that. I always try to incorporate it into my stories when I can (which is most of the time haha)
Anonymous
8/27/22, 9:37 AM
That was amazing! If you ever feel the need to continue with another chapter please do.

Kybal Lutra
8/28/22, 4:31 AM
Thanks so much!! Glad you enjoyed it
8/25/22, 1:55 AM
Also, really enjoyed this - ticked all my boxes, rang all my bells! Only criticism is with the ending - it's self-contained, it stands alone, I get it, but a second chapter of the expanding campaign... mmmm. And it's impact on the rest of the university and beyond... mmmm

Kybal Lutra
8/28/22, 4:31 AM
@scudder hahahaa maybe I’ll be commissioned to write the next chapter! You never know ;)
8/24/22, 10:33 PM
Really enjoyed this!

Kybal Lutra
8/28/22, 4:30 AM
@SwimJock thank you so much!!
8/28/22, 4:08 AM
Thanks for the ending.
8/28/22, 3:36 AM
Love your story! Interesting approach! Don't be shy and keep it up!
8/28/22, 2:21 AM
This epilogue was really fun, and I'm definitely excited for more of your stuff incoming 😄