Love your story! Interesting approach! Don't be shy and keep it up!

This epilogue was really fun, and I'm definitely excited for more of your stuff incoming 😄

Gotta love how good you write young tops, I really hope Jon can make that nightwing fantasy a reality 🤤

Great story! Can't wait to see how it ends for Dane.

LOVE this story, another great chapter. Personally, I'm hoping the end is Uri as a Power Bottom, and his ability to manipulate Freddy (as he's been doing) Lead's Freddy to be everything Uri wants him to be, giving Uri complete control over the rock (and they turn others together, giving Uri everything he wants). Can't wait for more.

I’m obviously fangirling about this series so hard lol. Now that was a full chapter. We got to see Freddy further questioning his sexuality and tastes. We got to see Uri push Freddy’s boundaries. We got to see Uri manipulate a mostly willing Freddy into giving Uri what he wanted. We got to read an extremely hot wake-up blowjob scene. We got some setup for possible future in a number of ways. The first scene is very well written, with your usual deftness, Nutiper. It’s really hot, to start off with. You strike the perfect balance of describing the scene with not over-narrating it and leaving nothing to the readers imagination. You also perfectly navigated Freddy’s feelings. He doesn’t want things to be too gay, but doesn’t actually stop Uri from feeling him up. He says no a few token times and then gives up. Because he does in fact like Uri feeling him up and didn’t want Uri to stop. It could’ve easily felt non-consensual. Freddy is narrating and he could have very naturally have felt out of control and taken advantage of by Uri. It didn’t feel that way at all tho. It really did read like Freddy saying one thing and quite clearly wanting something else. Bryant mentioned roommate problems. Will the rock work if Bryant moves in with them? Would Freddy be jealous if he was walking around, making Uri horny all the time, but instead of sucking off Freddy, Uri gets fucked by Bryant? How long is this story going? Is that even a possibility? (Not having any idea is delicious). Is Uri going to be upset about Freddy’s date? Freddy’s got enough juice in the tank for many sex partners, so it doesn’t need to stop the two roommates from fucking around. And Freddy hasn’t been noticeably upset or jealous about Uri sleeping with other people. But does Freddy want Uri to be jealous? Is that exciting to him? Does Freddy want to bottom? He explored a little bit this chapter but didn’t seem to like it. But… Uri did a great job of getting the wish he wanted. He reminds me of certain people I know: clever but not smart. He’s a great opportunist because thinks smartly in the moment but doesn’t worry about anything past the moment. Will Uri make a wish, while he’s got Freddy blissed out, on the edge of an orgasm, to make Freddy into a gay top? Will he make Freddy into a bottom? Do either of them want Freddy to be a bottom? Freddy is interesting too, besides how hot he is. He hasn’t been using the wishing rock except when angry, and his strategy so far with it seems to be to do a half-assed job keeping it away from Uri. He’s so unimaginative! He thinks further ahead than Uri, but not much. Why hasn’t he thought of using the rock to make them both rich? If they didn’t have to work and could travel or do anything else, surely they’d get along better. Or they could wish to have a house keeping service clean up their place. Or to both be more successful at work. … or to have enough money to live separately! Uri not thinking of that makes sense since he’s obsessed with sex. Freddy is pretty sex focused too, which yes, would distract him. But ultimately, I think Freddy likes Uri. He likes how Uri makes him feel. He likes feeling superior to Uri, even before he became a super stud (because Uri is such a lazy slob and a bit of a slut). I think that’s what’s underlying a lot of why Freddy does what he does and doesn’t do. Another excellently written chapter. Of course I can’t wait to read more.

I know this type of enslavement is not to everyone's liking, but this has been an excellent story. I had a regular hypnotist for a while who had me gain about 30 pounds because he liked his boys fat and jiggly. He gave me the trigger fat pig and when he used it, I would buy and eat an entire carton of ice cream. Of course, as a hypnotist he could also make sure I obeyed other commands he had. It took me a while to lose the weight after we stopped seeing each other, but I still remember him and that time as being one great experience. edited to add: I probably should explain that I did not scarf down the ice cream as fast as Colin did. It was just that I could not eat anything else until I had eaten a carton of ice cream Of course, each spoonful he fed me deepened the trance, making me want the ice cream more and more and also increasing my need to obey him.

Thank you for your reply. I look forward to it.

So freaking hot

LOVE LOVE that you included real life superstuds like WWE stars! if you ever write a sequel, please PLEASE include current WWE stars like drew mcintyre (major sigh), big e langston (those outrageous pecs), bobby lashley (the bod), and how about some real life pro bodybuilders like jay cutler (retired), gunter schlierkamp (retired) and so on? perhaps write a whole new story about capturing, conquering and converting superman! No, i'm not talking henry cavill or anyone else who portrayed superman. i'm talking a superman like the great artistic creation called blue eyed beast david (images online) a 6'6 375 pounds of hairy out if the world musclebound body and with drop dead gorgeous looks of dark hair and piercing blue eyes. A combination of clint walker (the one and only), steve reeves (enough said), mike henry (sexiest tarzan ever)..... heck you could write a story going retro "old school" about THEE one and only CLINT WALKER being captured, conquered and converted!... that would be off the chain kinky wicked pervy hot as he was the ULTIMATE man's man... okay, sorry to ramble...