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8/25/22, 2:35 AM
Here's an idea if you ever continue this. What if, because they are both possessed by Polter, Blake and Paul are connected? So Polter is able to swap around their senses and make them basically switch bodies while possessed? Blake would hate how "gay" it is to be in his friend's body and made to fuck his original body, while Paul realizes he actually likes being Blake and having the chance to fuck himself.
8/22/22, 7:36 PM
...Well, this ending is better then the initial one I guess, because at least this time their basically dead together. I personally still don't love it, but that's just me. Also, I noticed that the Knight mentions a Wizard...but they didn't make any sort of appearance?

8/22/22, 8:09 PM
@TaylorGuy Wizard was around near the start of the first chapter. He didn't stick around long after things started to go south, unlike the greedy Thief. And, thanks for sticking through with it. I'm sorry it still wasn't good for you, but I think things ended how they needed. I'm writing something a little similar with a more tender focus. I hope that it can appeal to you more.

8/25/22, 1:31 AM
@Blazargus Smart guy then! And your welcome haha, I guess I was hoping for something more along the lines of them both being turned into immortal slimes or something. Dark because they'd still be monsters, but still alive and aware and stuff. And aww, maybe! This was pretty good itself, (minus the Jester bit, clowns and anything clown adjacent are a nope!) just... idk I feel like them being turned into statues is effectively killing them, and is.... ok I guess? Just my personal taste, I do like death endings sometimes though so.

8/25/22, 1:41 AM
@TaylorGuy Things aren't all bad for our two heroes. Just like how the Lord of Change is trapped in a dream where he can do whatever he wants, Aren and Hugh are now living a happy and peaceful life in a world that exists only for them. Sure, they aren't active members of the community anymore, but hey! (Also, fully understandable. Clown adjacent topics are very marmite. I'm normally anti-clown, but I made an exception.)
8/24/22, 10:05 PM
Love this chapter. I enjoyed both parts. The first with the biker gang being turned into gay sex slaves was hot. But I mostly enjoyed the last part with Michael and the officer's. I hope we get to see more of that in later chapters.
8/24/22, 9:10 PM
Another great Chapter - thanks for writing it liked how the guys were taken over and esp liked how the police station will be soon
8/24/22, 5:04 PM
Dude, this series is amazing. It’s good seeing Ryan fulfill his purpose, and it’s good to see so many men freed from their silly inhibitions.
Anonymous
8/24/22, 3:32 PM
Like it! Keep going!!
8/24/22, 1:53 PM
First off the boys should have permanently removed all his body hair using a laser., as a permanent reminder of his status. Second point, what Mike & Jimmy did makes them equally gay as what they made Travis. They liked the sex not just the power & I , too, think Travis should have taken revenge on the three, even if he is now a cock whore. But I loved the story & I hope you continue to add to it. This is your story & so where ever you take it I will continue to be a fan
Anonymous
8/24/22, 1:53 PM
Where is the rest?!
8/24/22, 12:55 PM
I live to serve the virus
8/24/22, 12:08 PM
the wanking material of this story is enormous and i couldn't resist to enjoy it