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CMC
5/30/22, 3:52 PM
I loved this story back in the day! And I'm excited to see further installments!

8/25/22, 12:43 PM
@CMC Thanks!
8/25/22, 12:20 PM
I’m really digging the slow burn! It has me curious what’s happening mentally in Jack and Finn, and I’m also curious about the parallels between the MMO Jack plays and what Rada plays. I’m sure you’re drawing out something fiendishly clever and I’m looking forward to it!
8/25/22, 8:24 AM
Great idea and well written. Interested to see how many submit and what other kinks appear!

8/25/22, 10:47 AM
@DriftingScot Cheers! I'll be adding more over time, as I flit between other things.
AnonStud
8/25/22, 8:45 AM
I like your hot fucking story. Brody is such a cock crazed slut and now it must be Hank's turn to discover the delights of tube steak, weiner, dick, sausage, etc. Like son, like daddy. Cock must rule their lives and juicy cum the rewards of hard cock sucking and pussy plowing. Let's get cock up Hank's dark, dank male cunt hole.
Anonymous
8/25/22, 7:59 AM
great story and loved the narrative style... happy birthday - thanks for spoiling us!!!
8/25/22, 5:14 AM
Faaaaantastic. Can't wait.
blankbot
8/25/22, 2:58 AM
Wishing the happiest of birthdays to an author whose literary gifts keep on giving...
8/25/22, 2:35 AM
Here's an idea if you ever continue this. What if, because they are both possessed by Polter, Blake and Paul are connected? So Polter is able to swap around their senses and make them basically switch bodies while possessed? Blake would hate how "gay" it is to be in his friend's body and made to fuck his original body, while Paul realizes he actually likes being Blake and having the chance to fuck himself.
8/22/22, 7:36 PM
...Well, this ending is better then the initial one I guess, because at least this time their basically dead together. I personally still don't love it, but that's just me. Also, I noticed that the Knight mentions a Wizard...but they didn't make any sort of appearance?

8/22/22, 8:09 PM
@TaylorGuy Wizard was around near the start of the first chapter. He didn't stick around long after things started to go south, unlike the greedy Thief. And, thanks for sticking through with it. I'm sorry it still wasn't good for you, but I think things ended how they needed. I'm writing something a little similar with a more tender focus. I hope that it can appeal to you more.

8/25/22, 1:31 AM
@Blazargus Smart guy then! And your welcome haha, I guess I was hoping for something more along the lines of them both being turned into immortal slimes or something. Dark because they'd still be monsters, but still alive and aware and stuff. And aww, maybe! This was pretty good itself, (minus the Jester bit, clowns and anything clown adjacent are a nope!) just... idk I feel like them being turned into statues is effectively killing them, and is.... ok I guess? Just my personal taste, I do like death endings sometimes though so.

8/25/22, 1:41 AM
@TaylorGuy Things aren't all bad for our two heroes. Just like how the Lord of Change is trapped in a dream where he can do whatever he wants, Aren and Hugh are now living a happy and peaceful life in a world that exists only for them. Sure, they aren't active members of the community anymore, but hey! (Also, fully understandable. Clown adjacent topics are very marmite. I'm normally anti-clown, but I made an exception.)
8/24/22, 10:05 PM
Love this chapter. I enjoyed both parts. The first with the biker gang being turned into gay sex slaves was hot. But I mostly enjoyed the last part with Michael and the officer's. I hope we get to see more of that in later chapters.