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8/24/22, 9:40 AM
Amazing !
8/23/22, 5:03 PM
Thank you for another goodboy adventure! Great start!

8/24/22, 8:46 AM
@joejvegas Thank you! Really glad you’re enjoying
Anonymous
8/24/22, 4:41 AM
Fun story! May need some proof reading, the doms name kept changing and there were a couple typos. But im eager for more chapters!

8/24/22, 8:44 AM
@ Really glad you’re enjoying! I’ll definitely get on that!
Just Some Dude
8/24/22, 2:16 AM
Good story! I think at a few points though Mr.Smooth got rewritten as Mr.Spiral. Nothing too big, but made me a little confused. I’d recommend reading your work over once or twice just to make sure everything comes out as intended. Other than that a really good start to the series! And if you can sign me up for one of those good boy sessions 😉

8/24/22, 8:42 AM
@Just Some Dude thank you for the kind words! I’ll definitely get on that!
8/16/22, 9:15 AM
Simple by your standards, but interesting and well executed as always. Mac's dark personality is an interesting point here and letting him act that way is foolhardy to say the least. It could be the undoing of our protagonist Vincent, if you asked me.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 6:13 PM
@Sexcrab, I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Mac’s a wild card for sure and will definitely make things even more interesting down the line.

8/24/22, 6:51 AM
@Blackjinx123 Honestly, I wouldn't mind one bit if the next chapter was a filler where nothing happens but Emit and Mac using their sexy daddy bodies to seduce Vince as they vie for their young master's attention. So much that I, like many people on this site, like the "daddy slave" theme. But I know you have an agenda and this series, despite being very well written, has a slow pace. And I also want to see the Vince's brothers' punishment and Sam's downfall, despite my preferencies. Although this could happen in between seeing the suffering of the brothers at work. Hmm....
8/24/22, 5:37 AM
Good first chapter other than what others said about the names - a good boy needs a Daddy who is thinking along the same lines. So I think Mr King will need an appointment also
Anonymous
8/24/22, 5:29 AM
You're a perverted genius. Loved this years ago and love it better now.
8/24/22, 4:48 AM
Happy Birthday Hypnothrill and thank you so much for this expansion to one of the hottest classics ever. I always go back to this series and I love the concept on this one, it feels more widespread and "contagious". Even the removal of women's concerns, which makes it that much more sinister. Kudos!
Nov 20, 2018
rwriter51
8/24/22, 4:33 AM
That was really fun, and I like your writing style. It just rolls off the page so effortlessly.
Alex
8/24/22, 1:06 AM
Glad to see more chapters! Thanks for all your hard work doing this. Excited to see where you take things and how Brody and Hank (potentially) are further used and humiliated.