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8/22/22, 5:06 PM
I LOVED this! ‘Capture of the Justice Birds’ is one of my all-time favorite series, and this story did not disappoint. Your villain is one of my favorite heroes.
8/22/22, 1:01 PM
Always love reading your well written stories. This is just another example of your excellence.

8/22/22, 4:48 PM
Hey thanks. Maybe one day we might collaborate, if you are interested@Scot6789
8/22/22, 4:45 PM
I live to serve the Virus
8/22/22, 2:28 PM
When i first started to read this story was not sure if to carry on, but so glad that I did - well written and liked the outcome - Thanks

8/22/22, 3:43 PM
@MalSkin It means a lot to hear you found it worth sticking with! Thanks for the feedback too, I'll think about how better to lead-in in the future.
8/22/22, 2:43 PM
Great story - thanks!
8/22/22, 1:38 PM
Awesome!
Anonymous
8/22/22, 12:09 PM
Love it!
8/22/22, 11:49 AM
YES!!! PLEASE!!!!
8/22/22, 10:31 AM
Very hot.
8/21/22, 11:44 AM
I'm not normally a fan of this type of hyper-muscle growth and dumbing down stories, but I must admit I'm quite enjoying this one so far. I think because Luis and Mateo are going through this seemingly willingly and conscious of the dangers, and so far they are achieving the happiness they were looking for. I just hope they manage a balance between their bodybuilding and their remaining intelligence so they don't end up brain-dead mounds of muscle liable to be exploited by others. Phil finding out about the machine is an interesting twist and I'm excited to see where it goes. I quite like the idea of him using the machine to turn the rest of his friends into his own harem of muscle boys (maybe Murray and Benson are secretly into muscled hunks too), but I also don't want him to end up the bad guy. He's not really down anything wrong yet and just seems a bit confused about his sexuality. Looking forward to how this story progresses.

Anonymous
8/21/22, 3:56 PM
@phillipsm, well he did manipulate Mateo into telling him about the machine and from what I at least understood manipulated Lu into getting even bigger and dumber...

8/22/22, 7:49 AM
@ I don't really see getting Mateo to tell him about the machine as manipulation. Coersion sure, but Mateo still has agency and could have said no. And until we see how that last scene plays out in the next chapter or what lead up to it, I'm willing to give Phil the benefit of the doubt. Maybe Luis just wanted to be bigger because he was jealous of the attention Mateo is now getting? Who knows, we'll just have to wait until the next chapter to find out.