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8/22/22, 11:49 AM
YES!!! PLEASE!!!!
8/22/22, 10:31 AM
Very hot.
8/21/22, 11:44 AM
I'm not normally a fan of this type of hyper-muscle growth and dumbing down stories, but I must admit I'm quite enjoying this one so far. I think because Luis and Mateo are going through this seemingly willingly and conscious of the dangers, and so far they are achieving the happiness they were looking for. I just hope they manage a balance between their bodybuilding and their remaining intelligence so they don't end up brain-dead mounds of muscle liable to be exploited by others. Phil finding out about the machine is an interesting twist and I'm excited to see where it goes. I quite like the idea of him using the machine to turn the rest of his friends into his own harem of muscle boys (maybe Murray and Benson are secretly into muscled hunks too), but I also don't want him to end up the bad guy. He's not really down anything wrong yet and just seems a bit confused about his sexuality. Looking forward to how this story progresses.

Anonymous
8/21/22, 3:56 PM
@phillipsm, well he did manipulate Mateo into telling him about the machine and from what I at least understood manipulated Lu into getting even bigger and dumber...

8/22/22, 7:49 AM
@ I don't really see getting Mateo to tell him about the machine as manipulation. Coersion sure, but Mateo still has agency and could have said no. And until we see how that last scene plays out in the next chapter or what lead up to it, I'm willing to give Phil the benefit of the doubt. Maybe Luis just wanted to be bigger because he was jealous of the attention Mateo is now getting? Who knows, we'll just have to wait until the next chapter to find out.
8/22/22, 7:34 AM
I remember reading a variant of this on CYOC that has since been removed ☹️ It was from the step brothers perspective. He was using the genie to get with his hot, straight, step brother. At the same time he was trying to make life better for his single dad.
8/22/22, 7:08 AM
_"Despite Quincy’s d--- being in Paul , Paul was on top and controlling the action."_ I've read my share of 'power bottom' stories' and so few people seem to get what it's all about. This is a welcome exception, from his personality to those sneaky wardrobe changes. Great dialogue and pacing too
8/22/22, 6:11 AM
Loving this story and hoping for more soon!
Hinner
8/22/22, 5:15 AM
Would love to see more!
8/22/22, 3:49 AM
So glad u decided to keep it going!
Anonymous
8/22/22, 1:32 AM
I'm loving this chapter.
8/21/22, 10:50 PM
Fantastic job! The conquests and transformations by our Fallen Hero and the fight by our restored version led us to a very satisfying, if bittersweet ending. Great job, very well written and incredibly creative.

8/22/22, 12:02 AM
@Essex Thank you kindly! I appreciate all the feedback once again!