Recent Comments

8/18/22, 6:02 AM
Fantastic chapter! Jack sounds so real, you've really done an amazing job in characterization. And just when things were about to get heated... you got them gaming together! So awesome! I love how Finn is slowly falling for insecure Jack but how Jack is the boss in-game. Which, incidentally, was also very interestingly fleshed out, cheers to that too! I hope you keep going, this is such a cute story, and Rada is sure to complicate it interestingly.

8/21/22, 1:52 AM
@Essex Knowing the characterization is working for people is really gratifying. I was a little worried the swerve works bother people but I'm uh... edging my readers. Look forward to a fun twist next part.
8/18/22, 4:09 AM
This story is the wish I didn’t know i needed. It rubs my lamp in all the right ways. I usually hate a slow burn but I love the focus on the characters so much that I am fine with letting you edge me. Thank you and I am excited for what comes next.

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@Unruly Dogboy Thank you! Means a lot.
8/17/22, 8:08 PM
Really, really enjoying this. 😛😛😛

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@NeedControlling thanks!
8/20/22, 10:24 PM
This story is so incredibly well written! I really like this ending, because while it's not a truly happy ending it also isn't a simple bad ending and instead fits very well with the overall theme of the story. Definitely one of the best stories on here.

8/21/22, 12:19 AM
@Woweeflo Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! I could never see a normal "happy end" for this story, so I'm glad this bitter-sweet one felt right to you.
Anonymous
8/20/22, 7:22 PM
When can we expect the next chapter? :pray: :pray:
Aug 29, 2021
8/18/22, 7:12 PM
This story is very creative. I love the dad become cock aspect and how he changes people when he cums in them. Very well done.

Kods
8/20/22, 3:17 AM
@Drake Nightstorm Thank you for the comment! I've read several of your stories so I'm glad you enjoyed one of mine!

8/20/22, 6:57 PM
@Kods Yes it is quite enjoyable from a many aspects. It has creativity, well done descriptions of changes, unexpected twist and the interesting aspect of a dad that became his son's cock which also slowly changed the son. I loved all of these things about your story.
8/20/22, 6:56 PM
Thes3 three chapters are great and I sense a developing srory. I think I would like to read more chapters, but you set a high standard of tone and character interactions. I don't know how you can build anymore from where you are. Excellent work.
Oct 11, 2020
Bambibot
8/20/22, 5:36 PM
this this is perfection
Jun 10, 2022
Kuu
8/20/22, 5:04 PM
Will you continue this story?
8/20/22, 4:22 PM
With the abundance of SSRIs and the CBT you've described in your other work, you'd think there would be more prostate orgasmers.