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8/21/22, 4:08 AM
Hot story!! Love to hear more of the early encounters and induction.
8/21/22, 3:51 AM
This was a fun romp. It did have a little bit of an eerie quality like some force was trapping men here and making them himbos. I wouldn't have minded a little bit more description of Frank and his beefy hotness, and a little bit more sensual detail when he and Michael started to come together each time. Mostly just so that I could linger on those sexy parts before moving on to the next thing. For instance when Frank pinned Michael the first time maybe a few more lines of him thinking "wait I'm kind of enjoying this and this guy's abs are so bulgy I can feel them pushing into me" before he broke loose or something like that.
Anonymous
8/21/22, 3:39 AM
Very very very hot! Wouldn't mind a Master like that. Great job!
8/21/22, 2:57 AM
Oh man that ending.... Not gonna lie, it's getting to me ;__; I'm really glad you decided to continue with this story! All of the dealing with the allies was really fun. The mimic especially was super sexy, I always love weird sexy statues that lure you to your doom. It's fun to think of what misadventures he gets up too while everyone else is busy with the whole save the world thing. Thank you for writing and sharing this!

8/21/22, 3:02 AM
@gargayle Hey, I'm just glad you liked it! Thanks for all your feedback! While werewolf and jester were likely easy to track down and turn back, mimic might even still be out there somewhere,...
8/21/22, 2:57 AM
I like how Blake and Rod are turning out! Group orgy next?
8/18/22, 6:02 AM
Fantastic chapter! Jack sounds so real, you've really done an amazing job in characterization. And just when things were about to get heated... you got them gaming together! So awesome! I love how Finn is slowly falling for insecure Jack but how Jack is the boss in-game. Which, incidentally, was also very interestingly fleshed out, cheers to that too! I hope you keep going, this is such a cute story, and Rada is sure to complicate it interestingly.

8/21/22, 1:52 AM
@Essex Knowing the characterization is working for people is really gratifying. I was a little worried the swerve works bother people but I'm uh... edging my readers. Look forward to a fun twist next part.
8/18/22, 4:09 AM
This story is the wish I didn’t know i needed. It rubs my lamp in all the right ways. I usually hate a slow burn but I love the focus on the characters so much that I am fine with letting you edge me. Thank you and I am excited for what comes next.

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@Unruly Dogboy Thank you! Means a lot.
8/17/22, 8:08 PM
Really, really enjoying this. 😛😛😛

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@NeedControlling thanks!
8/20/22, 10:24 PM
This story is so incredibly well written! I really like this ending, because while it's not a truly happy ending it also isn't a simple bad ending and instead fits very well with the overall theme of the story. Definitely one of the best stories on here.

8/21/22, 12:19 AM
@Woweeflo Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! I could never see a normal "happy end" for this story, so I'm glad this bitter-sweet one felt right to you.
Anonymous
8/20/22, 7:22 PM
When can we expect the next chapter? :pray: :pray: