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8/20/22, 5:53 AM
Wanted it to continue! I guess you are tired of this story, or you would consider continuing on with the storyline! Maybe you'll do some work for TV. What is out there is so poorly written. You would be a Breath of Fresh Air! Look Forward to seeing more of your work. Good Luck & Thank You for Your Effort & Time. Take Care !
8/20/22, 5:28 AM
So good and i love that he accepted his fate of well i guess permanent shrinking chastity :))) can't wait for more
8/18/22, 11:27 AM
I loved this but that ending is just. Ooft. It honestly made me cry a little bit haha. I know this is probably wrong of me to ask, but I beg of you that if you continue this story that Aren and Hugh get some kind of better ending, even if it still leaves them under the thrall of the Demon Lord. Or if you'd consider writing an alternate ending to this where Aren doesn't end up killing Hugh (Because that's essentially what he did) or something because just... Yeah.

8/18/22, 1:40 PM
@TaylorGuy I'm really glad it had an impact for you! I wasn't originally going to continue the story, hence the dark and crushing ending being there to suggest what would have come next. But, all the feedback in the comments have convinced me to take things a little further. I hope the new chapter will strike a balance between the people who liked the dark turn and the people who feel bad for the couple. I hope to provide both in the next conclusion!

8/20/22, 4:16 AM
@Blazargus Wow, your glad that your story left me crying and with emotional pain? What kind of monster are you!? I kid though, it's fine haha, it's honestly not the worst impact a story has had on me (that title is claimed by three gay to straight stories I've read that I love yet hate) but it was still pretty ooft, because the sheer cruelty of the ending. I'm glad to hear that your going to write a second part to it, and I look forward to seeing how it balances between a bad and good ending! And I hope that you didn't feel bullied or pressured into doing so, because at least for me, that wasn't my intention, because after all it's your story and if you yourself are fully satisfied with it then that's what counts! I'd just create my own alternate ending in my head if need be haha.
8/18/22, 11:35 AM
Even if you don't continue the game project, I'd love to see a follow up to this where the edible wears off of Gavin and he realizes that what happened was real because his body is still changed! Maybe him freaking out a bit about his sexuality being altered? It'd also be interesting if Aster was able to come into the human world to reunite with Gavin.

8/19/22, 10:05 PM
@TaylorGuy Thanks! I'm trying to write more stand-alones, but I always have ideas for continuations.

8/20/22, 4:12 AM
@bluesuedewho Your welcome! And haha, I can sympathize there in a way. I tend to start a lot of stories but never really finish them, or have ideas for long stories that I struggle to actually fill in the bits between the ideas I have haha. Also, one thing I did notice about this is that you never really described what Gavin looks like? Unless I somehow missed that bit of course haha. Either way, if this is a one-off or gets a continuation, it was nice and I think that eventually Aster and Gavin would end up together again, they had good chemistry and maybe love between them, but how much was legitimate and how much was due to magic is up in the air lol.
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8/20/22, 1:47 AM
I HAD TO PUT MY DICK AWAY WHY WAS THIS SO GOOD!!! I love the story so much and this ending just touched my heart !!!!
8/19/22, 9:26 PM
Loved it! Interesting to learn more about the curse and the rules around it, but this wasn't just an info dump chapter, it was a cumdump chapter too :) Tank is my favourite transformation so far. I was wondering, since the guys pass down weakened versions of their gifts, does that mean that everyone Tank fucks gets dumber and bigger too?

8/19/22, 10:25 PM
@Derek Williams Tank fucking the football team into being dumber and stronger sounds about right to me. And fun. The curses do tend to create compatible sex partners. So insatiable slut bottoms create power tops, dom daddies create sub boys, bimbo male cheerleaders create himbo male athletes. But nothing seems incompatible about dumb, strong, himbos fucking each other into more dumb, strong himbos.
8/18/22, 2:02 PM
This was a fun read. The way Aster seduced him was hot. All of the names of things in the Fae court had your trademark cleverness, making it fun. And it had a nice ending. I’d definitely read more stories of the Fae courts.

8/19/22, 10:06 PM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks! I had fun writing this one, even though it took longer than planned.
8/17/22, 6:56 PM
I would personally love to see more weird fae politics with a sexy twist from you!

8/19/22, 10:04 PM
@gargayle Thanks! I'm juggling a lot of WIPs right now, but I definitely have notes for more like this.
8/19/22, 9:02 PM
very hot
8/19/22, 7:21 PM
Still hoping that Vic asserts himself and takes control of his Daddy more

8/19/22, 8:09 PM
@Knighte If you pay attention Vic is definitely the one calling all the shots. He’s got Coach wrapped around his finger without Coach even knowing it.