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8/19/22, 1:09 PM
I’d love to see more of this story! It’s so great so far!
8/19/22, 9:56 AM
MY PRECIOUS Also, it feels like the ring was setting him up, which I guess was probably not intended to be seen like that, but one can look at it as if it's loyal to Zane and took matters to its own "hand" to push Aiden over the needed edge.

8/19/22, 12:44 PM
@Reader I appreciate that insight! It was more the fact that Adrian did not use the magic words.
8/17/22, 2:31 PM
I prefer this ending, much hotter, thanks...

8/19/22, 11:34 AM
Yeah I really like this ending as well because I like that Connor and Trevor can enjoy their paradise instead of being hopeless @Maxigay
Anonymous
8/19/22, 9:55 AM
reminds me of Itto's "SQUIRM"
8/19/22, 9:27 AM
Amazing story! The blend of rough, raw sex and sweet, gentle emotion is a delicious dish. :D And I know I carped about consent in previous comments, so I want to say that I really like that you included lines like “gave me permission with his eyes” in this tale. :) Hooray for your imagination!
8/17/22, 7:12 PM
the changing titles thing is a really fun way to do transformations! I'd definitely love to see more of this fantasy world; maybe some of the Prince's old allies can show up...? The betrayal at the end did leave me very sad though, I'm sad that Aren didn't get to keep having a loving horny slime boyfriend ;_;

8/17/22, 8:00 PM
@gargayle Thanks! As the story developed I had originally planned to drag the Prince's allies in and have him warp them too, but I ended up focusing on the relationship with Hugh. As for that, the more time I spent with the Demon Lord the more I came to accept that the two guys were not going to have a happy ending. Maybe Aren's future holds some better possibilities.

8/18/22, 10:15 PM
@Blazargus I think the fact that I wanted things to work out for them in some way speaks to how you managed to make Hugh and Aren quite compelling despite the story being relatively short! I get why it ended the way it did though; sometimes the sad ending is the most sensible one

8/19/22, 7:16 AM
@gargayle The sequel chapter is seeking validation right now. I think I like the ending for the first part being this hopeless situation, before moving in to a more varied set-up for the next. I believe the final ending will seem bittersweet, compared to this one.
blankbot
8/19/22, 1:06 AM
Witty and erotic--a great combination!

8/19/22, 7:04 AM
@blankbot Thank you kindly!
8/19/22, 6:33 AM
A great start!
hypnoslut
8/19/22, 5:16 AM
fantastic story
8/19/22, 4:51 AM
Ho boy yeah. This was a hot one. Looking forward to seeing more from you