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nycboot
8/19/22, 1:04 AM
I wouldn't say so much that it's a "happy" ending but rather that it's a much more satisfying ending. There's so much more detail, tieing up of loose ends and giving voice to the feelings of the protagonists. Definitely a much richer ending - and bravo for a nice conclusion!
Top today
8/19/22, 12:04 AM
Some characters should be father and son. Such as a son watch his father slowly changing.
8/18/22, 3:02 PM
E-Lactation to feed the babies. One question I have is how the dads had no problem abandoning their kids. Why make a baby only to leave it? I guess it's a minor issue but I'm curious.

8/18/22, 11:46 PM
@Cutlerfan You ask, and so I will answer. But first, after rereading the previous chapter, I noticed a lot of spelling errors and mistakes that changed the meaning of some points that would have contributed to their part of the story: I meant to write that Bobby **_(wouldn’t)_** support the babies from his previous life which led to all the girls who got pregnant(I’m gonna make it canon and say he impregnated 13 girls who all got abortions), apparently Word auto-corrected by removing the “n’t” part which made no sense. With that correction, Freddy let the clients know about that fact: Bobby’s dad and Mr. Guerrero knowledge about that fueled their angers, I guess I should have found a way to make that more explicit. Mr. Guerrero’s daughter was one of the people who got pregnant by him so that only made him want to go through with the plan even more. For his dad, I also mentioned earlier in the previous part that Bobby left because both of his parents were annoyed by his presence and wanted him out of the house so they can move(the stream for these porno streams are on the dark web so Mrs. Barlowe wouldn’t have a high chance of being able to see that, and none of the fans would try to alert the authorities of this, in fact, there may come a time where the it’s revealed that the authorities do know about this, but that’s something for later depending on the voting). Also, they didn’t 100% abandon those babies, but only because they gave money to impregnate him. I felt like Bobby being abandoned by some of the men who impregnated him would be like karma for all the girls he got pregnant and also degrade him further by treating him like an object just like he did with all those girls he left pregnant. I didn’t feel right that the babies should be left behind like that, so I wrote in Doctor Mannheim who will easily support all those babies with his career. Of course, Damien will be involved in all of the babies’ lives and same for Bobby. From here till the next stream, the babies will be given baby formula, but if E is selected, then that will definitely change.
8/18/22, 11:35 PM
A great and original take on the vore subject with a happy ending for the fleeing gays. Great job!
8/18/22, 8:48 PM
Would love another chapter of this!
8/18/22, 8:09 PM
Interesting take on vore. I like it, and I’m not even into vore. All in all, another superb piece of literature to add to my bookmarks.
8/18/22, 7:34 PM
The Himbo/Obmih dynamic is so good! This whole series is so good and wholesome, it's sugar to my soul!

8/18/22, 7:52 PM
@Twan Andersen I'm so glad you've been enjoying it :grin: Their dynamic is so fun to write!
8/18/22, 7:31 PM
This is the modern Scooby Doo I never thought I wanted, fantastic job as always!

8/18/22, 7:47 PM
@Twan Andersen The highest of praise :blush:
8/18/22, 5:55 PM
@Masters Toy, I loved this addition to my kink factory series man! Really loved the boot transformation most and one on the guys being stuck like that. Thanks for adding to my community series 👐

Anonymous
8/18/22, 7:44 PM
@TieMeEdgeMe thanks for all ur help finishing it, I think more guys should be turned in rubber boots. I live in a boring part of the world can't find a master
rwriter51
8/18/22, 7:36 PM
Very hot! I love Nick's inability to think beyond his desire for cock, and his growing slide into total submission.