Recent Comments

JRL
8/18/22, 7:13 PM
I looked over and saw the evidence of Victor’s pussy-gasm dirtyting up the side of my passenger door. Victor didn’t even seem to notice the mess he was making, he was so perfectly zoned out in pleasure....SO. FUCKING. HOT!!!!
DB
8/18/22, 5:07 PM
Great series! Keep going…or cumming!
8/18/22, 4:54 PM
The gays get the best real estate, once again. :laughing:
8/18/22, 4:49 PM
Very hot! But also so cute and sweet at the end :) Coach gotta take care of his boy <3
Anonymous
8/17/22, 11:59 PM
The Prince’s allies should be changed in the next chapter, I hope that you can change them to be younger or dumper.

8/18/22, 12:01 AM
@ I'll see what I can do there ;)

Anonymous
8/18/22, 4:47 PM
@BlazargusI like your story very much, so keep going!!!
8/18/22, 2:51 PM
Mpreg definitely!
Boomer
8/18/22, 1:03 PM
Please don't listen to the folks complaining about how dark it is. This was awesome and ticked so many boxes for me There are tons of more wholesome/softer mind control and transformation stories, but this one is serious, dark and horny as fuck. The villain winning is amazing, and the betrayal is hot as fuck

8/18/22, 1:47 PM
@Boomer Thank you so much! My personal tastes are all over the place; I draw the lines at some things, but I'm a big fan of both light and fun MC stories and full blown dark ones. I'm peeved by cop-out endings where everything just falls back into place, unless they're well set up. That said, I'm going to risk muddying the waters here and post a sequel which continues the story (despite not having planned to do so originally). It won't end quite so bleakly (only in a relative sense), but it should be a happy medium between brutally dark and warm and fuzzy. Hope it still lives up to your expectations!