Recent Comments

8/19/22, 9:27 AM
Amazing story! The blend of rough, raw sex and sweet, gentle emotion is a delicious dish. :D And I know I carped about consent in previous comments, so I want to say that I really like that you included lines like “gave me permission with his eyes” in this tale. :) Hooray for your imagination!
8/17/22, 7:12 PM
the changing titles thing is a really fun way to do transformations! I'd definitely love to see more of this fantasy world; maybe some of the Prince's old allies can show up...? The betrayal at the end did leave me very sad though, I'm sad that Aren didn't get to keep having a loving horny slime boyfriend ;_;

8/17/22, 8:00 PM
@gargayle Thanks! As the story developed I had originally planned to drag the Prince's allies in and have him warp them too, but I ended up focusing on the relationship with Hugh. As for that, the more time I spent with the Demon Lord the more I came to accept that the two guys were not going to have a happy ending. Maybe Aren's future holds some better possibilities.

8/18/22, 10:15 PM
@Blazargus I think the fact that I wanted things to work out for them in some way speaks to how you managed to make Hugh and Aren quite compelling despite the story being relatively short! I get why it ended the way it did though; sometimes the sad ending is the most sensible one

8/19/22, 7:16 AM
@gargayle The sequel chapter is seeking validation right now. I think I like the ending for the first part being this hopeless situation, before moving in to a more varied set-up for the next. I believe the final ending will seem bittersweet, compared to this one.
blankbot
8/19/22, 1:06 AM
Witty and erotic--a great combination!

8/19/22, 7:04 AM
@blankbot Thank you kindly!
8/19/22, 6:33 AM
A great start!
hypnoslut
8/19/22, 5:16 AM
fantastic story
8/19/22, 4:51 AM
Ho boy yeah. This was a hot one. Looking forward to seeing more from you
Morge.Aion
8/19/22, 3:16 AM
I am from China, reading your woking is that sexual desire is higher and higher so that can't stop.:heart_eyes:
Anonymous
8/19/22, 1:10 AM
I’m absolutely loving this story! You do a great job capturing the chemistry and other feelings between these guys. Can’t wait for more
nycboot
8/19/22, 1:04 AM
I wouldn't say so much that it's a "happy" ending but rather that it's a much more satisfying ending. There's so much more detail, tieing up of loose ends and giving voice to the feelings of the protagonists. Definitely a much richer ending - and bravo for a nice conclusion!
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8/19/22, 12:04 AM
Some characters should be father and son. Such as a son watch his father slowly changing.