Recent Comments

8/17/22, 3:09 PM
this story could be good but it lacks character descriptions and background

Charles
8/17/22, 9:59 PM
@ZackF Thanks for the comment. It was intended to be a first-person point of view diary style entry. More about the process and the journey than the personalities.

8/17/22, 10:18 PM
@Charles May I ask how old the characters are and their body type? Also, was charles served in the military?

8/18/22, 1:17 AM
@ZackF Carl 50'ish 5'10" close cropped grey hair, mustache, moderate paunch, insurance sales Charles 70'ish 6'2" 187 curly grey hair, aerobic fit (as opposed to weight lifting. He served in the military, active for 8 years, then reserves. Now a VP for operations for a logistics company.

8/18/22, 7:29 AM
@Charles Thank you for this. This story just gotten hotter. I like big submissive Daddy
8/18/22, 6:51 AM
I'm very intrigued to see where the different paths lead.
Anonymous
8/18/22, 3:58 AM
This was incredibly hot!! Thank you for writing a fantasy transformation story like this one.
8/18/22, 2:36 AM
More fun escalation! Great work with this chapter -- it's fun to see these big shifts as they happen, built up from the foundations of those tiny shifts and details at the start!
8/17/22, 11:24 PM
Nice story. Looking forward for the next chapter

8/17/22, 11:38 PM
@Rocky Thanks! I'm debating what to do with the story right now, but I'm looking into it.
8/17/22, 10:53 PM
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8/17/22, 9:50 PM
Omg so hot! Was looking forward to this chapter all week, didn't even know I liked this fetish until your story
8/17/22, 7:13 PM
I was loving it. Then you brought out the milking machine, and that sent me right over the edge. Great story. Can't wait to read more. Would love to be in Bulk's shoes.....or paws

8/17/22, 9:11 PM
@oraclex Thank you! glad to know you loved it! part 2 is still in my mind, but will definitely have milking too >:3
8/17/22, 9:10 PM
Holy fuck. Kinks & buttons I didn’t know I had. Cannot get over how fucking good this is. If Freddy grows body hair or becomes an overly masc dom in the next chapter I would literally die. Whatever happens it’s gonna be hot as hell.
8/17/22, 4:43 PM
sorry, but I did not like this one

8/17/22, 6:05 PM
@darkblade2814 Sorry to hear that. I'm trying out a lot of ideas right now, so I appreciate any feedback I can get.

8/17/22, 6:18 PM
@Blazargus I did not like the betrayal thing and I don't like violence on erotic stories

8/17/22, 8:06 PM
@darkblade2814 I understand. I'm not usually one for violence either, but I felt it necessary in the setting. As for the betrayal, the story turned out quite dark and I can see how that can be very divisive. I'll change the tags around a bit.

8/17/22, 8:09 PM
@Blazargus thank you, as I'm not found of dark stories