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8/14/22, 5:05 PM
Usually I'd be worried we're heading towards a story with a bad ending, but in you I have a complete faith that the ending will not only be magnificent and hot, but truly happy and possibly heartwarming.

8/18/22, 12:16 PM
@Reader I agree with you that I'd normally be worried that this was on a path that leads to Luis and Mateo becoming essentially brain dead jocks under the control of Phil that are barely capable of breathing on their own. But given this authors other works, I have some faith that the end will (hopefully!) be a happy one where Luis and Mateo are able to regain their lost intelligence and some of their old personalities, maybe even become smarter than they were before, and still retain their new bodies. But that's just my personal hope haha.
Jul 13, 2022
8/18/22, 12:09 PM
Is this going to be a series or a one-off? Because I personally would be interested if it became a series. That being said, the story overall leaves me conflicted because it's hot, and I love how quickly Aiden managed to break Steve, but then at the end he showed tenderness to Steve that could be an opening for a more equal, loving relationship between them. On the other hand, if I was Steve I'd probably off myself after all of that had occurred to me haha.
8/18/22, 12:01 PM
Ok this is starting to get interesting, and also looks like it has the potential to spiral out of control and leave everyone hurt, which in itself isn't neccessarily a bad thing. Maybe the jock can help all of them get back to normal and lift the curse on Bryan and Max? I just hope that Nick and Max's relationship can withstand all of this and that it brings them closer in the end! And that Bryan faces some sort of karma for what he did in the last chapter.
Marky
8/18/22, 11:57 AM
Fantástic máx. Thanks a lot for your relate. Marky is a forced whore, but maybe could be forced to be a real gay, I mean be forced to fuck a en, also ugly and old Men...
8/18/22, 11:54 AM
I like where this is going so far! Makes me excited to see how the rest of the week goes. But it also makes me wonder about what sort of repercussions all of this will have for Ben and Landon, mentally, emotionally and physically, and how it could end up effecting their relationship.
Aug 13, 2022
8/18/22, 11:50 AM
I love this, even if it's something that I personally had trouble reading because of the older brothers name haha. I love how Junior ends up making his brother behave better and be his lover and protecter! Personally if I was to continue this, I'd probably do it to where overtime the hypnosis wears off and it comes out that his brother has always harbored feelings of love and lust towards him, and that his previously shitty behavior was his way of trying to repress those feelings. That or, considering how strong the hypnosis was, have Junior push things and discover that the hypnosis was powerful enough to where it can cause physical changes to his brother!
8/18/22, 8:55 AM
Bears Youngbuck! ♥️ This is a super story so far, keep the chapters cumming. I usually don't read noire detective fiction, though I've grown to like the genre thanks to themed episodes of shows like Charmed, Legends of Tomorrow, Bones, etc. You've got all this lingo that the detective uses in his narration. And the world building is so fun to discover, I want to go apartment hunting in the Dickstricts.
8/17/22, 3:09 PM
this story could be good but it lacks character descriptions and background

Charles
8/17/22, 9:59 PM
@ZackF Thanks for the comment. It was intended to be a first-person point of view diary style entry. More about the process and the journey than the personalities.

8/17/22, 10:18 PM
@Charles May I ask how old the characters are and their body type? Also, was charles served in the military?

8/18/22, 1:17 AM
@ZackF Carl 50'ish 5'10" close cropped grey hair, mustache, moderate paunch, insurance sales Charles 70'ish 6'2" 187 curly grey hair, aerobic fit (as opposed to weight lifting. He served in the military, active for 8 years, then reserves. Now a VP for operations for a logistics company.

8/18/22, 7:29 AM
@Charles Thank you for this. This story just gotten hotter. I like big submissive Daddy
8/18/22, 6:51 AM
I'm very intrigued to see where the different paths lead.
Anonymous
8/18/22, 3:58 AM
This was incredibly hot!! Thank you for writing a fantasy transformation story like this one.