Recent Comments

8/17/22, 7:12 PM
This is really, really interesting. And hot! 😍 I'm glad I decided to read this, and am looking forward to whatever is next! 😁
8/17/22, 6:40 PM
I love this happy ending. Are u going to write some more sequels? I hope so. Thanks for these series
8/16/22, 11:42 AM
Crazy hot as always, dude. The unexpected consequences of the mind control orders and the internal obsessions of Vincent's victims is awesome. Keep it up because this is scorching hot!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 6:15 PM
@Dace, thanks so much for all the love! I’m so glad you’ve enjoyed the story so far :heart:
8/16/22, 2:06 AM
Excellent as always! I really enjoy the programming but wish there was even more humiliation lol. Well done!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 6:12 PM
@Kelly, thank you so much! I can guarantee that there will be plenty of humiliation in Eli’s chapter, which is coming up soon!
8/16/22, 1:15 AM
First and foremost, I cannot express how much I love this story and character development you build. The fact you give so much "love" to older males is always fresh to see compared with the majority that pick on only youngsters (which is not bad but I'm more into older males as the victims, specially by young ones). The parts where you make the mindless and act like puppets, 69ing and now fihgtin for his master's love... uff. Having said that, I really hope Sam becomes the guinea pig! And having one of the older brothers or both as house maids would be awesome. The only way this can be better if it had feet on it, since its one of my fav fetishes. But thats only for me, you do you, this is gold.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 6:09 PM
@Udems, great minds think alike, my friend! Old vs. young is one of my favorite kinks, and most of the stories i write have an element of that. I’ll have those posted on here eventually too. Mac and Emit’s new dynamic is something I’m really looking forward to writing, as well as tossing Sam into the fray. While i wont spoil things, Sam is in for a hard time, Pun intended ;) Thank you so much for all the love for this story. I cant tell you how much i appreciate it!
8/17/22, 5:53 PM
Fucking hot.
8/17/22, 3:17 PM
I didn’t think you could top the original chapter of this story but this one at least equals it for completely different reasons. Getting to know these characters has its own levels of delight. Thank you.

8/17/22, 5:13 PM
@John Manning it's very intimidating to follow up a surprise hit, but it's a great challenge to try and keep the quality level up where it needs to be.
8/17/22, 3:16 PM
I really love how sweet and fleshed out the characters are in this...they feel like proper humans. I'm loving it.

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@Reynard high praise! Thanks!
8/17/22, 5:04 PM
AHHH! I hate it when I read about a fun mmorpg that does not exist! So, well done on your part! Overall, I really like how fleshed out all the characters are. I actually started grinning as it dawned on Finn who he was getting tips from. And of course, quite the hot scene we (almost) got there, looking forward to more. Keep it up! :)

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@xentiornes I promise it's going to be an awesome MMO...!
8/16/22, 12:32 AM
Hot hot hot. Some brotherly pain sluttery and humiliation please!!!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:09 PM
@Coq au Vin, thanks! Erik and Eli’s punishment is up next, no worries!