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8/15/22, 4:35 PM
YEEEEEEEEEEES! Mac and Dad playing with each other was something I was hoping for,having them mindless while doing so was an added bonus. Now I'm waiting for the Doc and the Cop to come home

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:08 PM
@ForgottenCradle, I’m so happy to hear that! I definitely had a blast writing this chapter, so I’m glad it’s so well loved in return. Erik and Eli’s much anticipated punishment will begin next chapter. It might take me a little longer because I’m a perfectionist and i want their first torture session to live up to the wait thus far :)
8/15/22, 1:39 PM
Are we going to see the brothers, especially in their uniforms? Dying to see that!!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:05 PM
@uniformeddandy, absolutely! As a cop, Erik has more of a uniform than Doc Kingston, and i plan to have some fun with that.
8/15/22, 10:49 AM
It's getting better anf better man, nice. I really hope vince make them act and think like they are vince's wife.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@TimDrake22, I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
8/15/22, 7:49 AM
Amazing job can’t wait for the chapter

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Diyù, thanks so much!
Iriefal
8/15/22, 7:43 AM
Yeeey, another one, thank you. Can't w8 what he will do with Sam(?). His father's friend when he comes to "solve" problem

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Iriefal, you’re most welcome! I wont spoil anything, but needless to say, Sam’s in for a rough ride ;)
8/15/22, 6:57 AM
I'm really quite enjoying the dark edge to this story. It's not often you see hypnosis twisting a person, bringing out their darkness. Mac seems like a loose cannon, perfect for smashing a detailed plan to pieces.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:00 PM
@Norismo, thank you so much! I’m happy to hear you’re enjoying the story. A loose cannon is an excellent way of describing Mac. He’s been a lot of fun to write so far and i look forward to messing with him and all the rest of the Kingstons in the future!
8/17/22, 3:37 PM
Holy shit this was hot
8/17/22, 2:44 PM
Omg the slow burn that I didn’t know I needed. The wait was definitely worth it. love it!

8/17/22, 3:07 PM
@Curious53 That's awesome! Also thank you for reminding me that I meant to tag it slow burn. 😅
Anonymous
8/17/22, 2:53 PM
This will be the canonical ending for me, super hot. And now I want to see what happens when Jared returns all those years later!
8/17/22, 2:41 PM
Super sexy and awesome! Love this ending! Will consider it to be the official ending. hehe I think that this is a much nicer result for Connor and Trevor and Russel and the others. I also thing the events here help explain Jared's anger and rage and such. So yeah, sexy, fun, awesome. Love the buttplay and while there can always be more of it the amount here is fun and enjoyable. Thank you for writing this and I am glad you had fun too!