Recent Comments

8/17/22, 3:17 PM
I didn’t think you could top the original chapter of this story but this one at least equals it for completely different reasons. Getting to know these characters has its own levels of delight. Thank you.

8/17/22, 5:13 PM
@John Manning it's very intimidating to follow up a surprise hit, but it's a great challenge to try and keep the quality level up where it needs to be.
8/17/22, 3:16 PM
I really love how sweet and fleshed out the characters are in this...they feel like proper humans. I'm loving it.

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@Reynard high praise! Thanks!
8/17/22, 5:04 PM
AHHH! I hate it when I read about a fun mmorpg that does not exist! So, well done on your part! Overall, I really like how fleshed out all the characters are. I actually started grinning as it dawned on Finn who he was getting tips from. And of course, quite the hot scene we (almost) got there, looking forward to more. Keep it up! :)

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@xentiornes I promise it's going to be an awesome MMO...!
8/16/22, 12:32 AM
Hot hot hot. Some brotherly pain sluttery and humiliation please!!!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:09 PM
@Coq au Vin, thanks! Erik and Eli’s punishment is up next, no worries!
8/15/22, 4:35 PM
YEEEEEEEEEEES! Mac and Dad playing with each other was something I was hoping for,having them mindless while doing so was an added bonus. Now I'm waiting for the Doc and the Cop to come home

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:08 PM
@ForgottenCradle, I’m so happy to hear that! I definitely had a blast writing this chapter, so I’m glad it’s so well loved in return. Erik and Eli’s much anticipated punishment will begin next chapter. It might take me a little longer because I’m a perfectionist and i want their first torture session to live up to the wait thus far :)
8/15/22, 1:39 PM
Are we going to see the brothers, especially in their uniforms? Dying to see that!!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:05 PM
@uniformeddandy, absolutely! As a cop, Erik has more of a uniform than Doc Kingston, and i plan to have some fun with that.
8/15/22, 10:49 AM
It's getting better anf better man, nice. I really hope vince make them act and think like they are vince's wife.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@TimDrake22, I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
8/15/22, 7:49 AM
Amazing job can’t wait for the chapter

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Diyù, thanks so much!
Iriefal
8/15/22, 7:43 AM
Yeeey, another one, thank you. Can't w8 what he will do with Sam(?). His father's friend when he comes to "solve" problem

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Iriefal, you’re most welcome! I wont spoil anything, but needless to say, Sam’s in for a rough ride ;)
8/15/22, 6:57 AM
I'm really quite enjoying the dark edge to this story. It's not often you see hypnosis twisting a person, bringing out their darkness. Mac seems like a loose cannon, perfect for smashing a detailed plan to pieces.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:00 PM
@Norismo, thank you so much! I’m happy to hear you’re enjoying the story. A loose cannon is an excellent way of describing Mac. He’s been a lot of fun to write so far and i look forward to messing with him and all the rest of the Kingstons in the future!