Recent Comments

8/15/22, 10:49 AM
It's getting better anf better man, nice. I really hope vince make them act and think like they are vince's wife.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@TimDrake22, I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
8/15/22, 7:49 AM
Amazing job can’t wait for the chapter

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Diyù, thanks so much!
Iriefal
8/15/22, 7:43 AM
Yeeey, another one, thank you. Can't w8 what he will do with Sam(?). His father's friend when he comes to "solve" problem

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Iriefal, you’re most welcome! I wont spoil anything, but needless to say, Sam’s in for a rough ride ;)
8/15/22, 6:57 AM
I'm really quite enjoying the dark edge to this story. It's not often you see hypnosis twisting a person, bringing out their darkness. Mac seems like a loose cannon, perfect for smashing a detailed plan to pieces.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:00 PM
@Norismo, thank you so much! I’m happy to hear you’re enjoying the story. A loose cannon is an excellent way of describing Mac. He’s been a lot of fun to write so far and i look forward to messing with him and all the rest of the Kingstons in the future!
8/17/22, 3:37 PM
Holy shit this was hot
8/17/22, 2:44 PM
Omg the slow burn that I didn’t know I needed. The wait was definitely worth it. love it!

8/17/22, 3:07 PM
@Curious53 That's awesome! Also thank you for reminding me that I meant to tag it slow burn. 😅
Anonymous
8/17/22, 2:53 PM
This will be the canonical ending for me, super hot. And now I want to see what happens when Jared returns all those years later!
8/17/22, 2:41 PM
Super sexy and awesome! Love this ending! Will consider it to be the official ending. hehe I think that this is a much nicer result for Connor and Trevor and Russel and the others. I also thing the events here help explain Jared's anger and rage and such. So yeah, sexy, fun, awesome. Love the buttplay and while there can always be more of it the amount here is fun and enjoyable. Thank you for writing this and I am glad you had fun too!
Anonymous
8/17/22, 12:47 PM
This is both hot and delightful! I hope this more character-rich addition means you've found some inspiration; it has always left me itching for more. Now that you've tossed so many interesting plates in the air I can't wait to see where you take it. Very hot, very charming. Love the parallel of Jack thinking Finn outclasses his avatar, and Finn thinking Jack is the bigger stud in-game. Rada's "intimidating roommate" act is also interestingly subtle. Give all these nerds get a happy ending!

8/17/22, 1:34 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you found all of those things interesting!
Iriefal
8/17/22, 11:39 AM
Woow, just woow Love it, pls never give up on this story. I like how Rama is slightly jealous and how the story progress. Normally I prefer dominant smaller guys, as I myself am switch, but damn, description from jack side was very well written as from the other side was magic enhanced, so not really counted in. It is just my suggestion but please don't make it love triangle where Rama and Finn fight with each other, make it threesome manage and make everyone in the story happy🙏🥰

8/17/22, 1:33 PM
@Iriefal Thanks for reading this huge story segment. I really thought about splitting it in half to make it more manageable. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. 😌