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Anonymous
8/17/22, 12:47 PM
This is both hot and delightful! I hope this more character-rich addition means you've found some inspiration; it has always left me itching for more. Now that you've tossed so many interesting plates in the air I can't wait to see where you take it. Very hot, very charming. Love the parallel of Jack thinking Finn outclasses his avatar, and Finn thinking Jack is the bigger stud in-game. Rada's "intimidating roommate" act is also interestingly subtle. Give all these nerds get a happy ending!

8/17/22, 1:34 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you found all of those things interesting!
Iriefal
8/17/22, 11:39 AM
Woow, just woow Love it, pls never give up on this story. I like how Rama is slightly jealous and how the story progress. Normally I prefer dominant smaller guys, as I myself am switch, but damn, description from jack side was very well written as from the other side was magic enhanced, so not really counted in. It is just my suggestion but please don't make it love triangle where Rama and Finn fight with each other, make it threesome manage and make everyone in the story happy🙏🥰

8/17/22, 1:33 PM
@Iriefal Thanks for reading this huge story segment. I really thought about splitting it in half to make it more manageable. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. 😌
8/16/22, 8:11 PM
Wow - this was great! I really enjoyed it.

8/17/22, 12:08 PM
@stimle Cheers! I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate the kind words!
8/17/22, 11:52 AM
Very nice. Can I have the cowboy back too?
8/17/22, 8:30 AM
What can I say, I'm a sucker for a good ending. The sex scenes where hot as usual and I think it was a very interesting way to develop the lore of the tribe and the lore of DubCon Corp. It also showed a great deal of Jared's personality, proving that he always had ill intentions, so it wasn't caused by the transformation mental change while also showing his will power and setting his way to villainy. In some ways I think this ending can explain Jared's need of a manly son and his insistence on humiliating others and exploiting them. One thing I should mention is that I think you have a misspelling in one of the lines: "He realised that he could cum anytime he wanted, that the Wiraqocha did not need to fuck for as long as they did, but they simply ++**embarrassed**++ the pleasure of doing what came naturally to them". I think you meant to say embraced instead of embarrassed. But that's not a biggy.

8/17/22, 9:38 AM
@Reader thanks :) While I enjoy Jared's original journey to becoming Mr Booker, I think this humiliation and set-back is really the catalyst that turns him from jerk to full villain, and deepens why he is obsessed with masculinity and dom/sub roles. Thank you for mentioning, fixed it :)
8/17/22, 5:28 AM
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8/17/22, 5:16 AM
Also. It’s just genuinely hot. SS rimming CC’s hairy globes! I’m really looking forward to learning… what is CC? Is he straight? (I don’t think that actually exists here—-I think we’re in an mpreg universe personally.) is he a otter?—who dreams of bulking and retiring on Bear River? What would most humiliate him in the HHC?! I’m here for this!
8/17/22, 5:12 AM
Bro! Just binged the series. So good! I know humor isn’t the point on this site. But I love a funny story, one that gets the weirdness of the narrative or out kink. That works when the author is aware that’s what he’s and embraces it. (Tho with others. often it’s boring.) But you have corners the market on hot and GOOFY! The worldbuilding of Himbotown, HH, Twinktown, Straightsylvania—are there women there, or just prude men? The commitment to the noir voice! And puns (“once the heighest form of humor” -bill from True Blood; “Yeah, More Puns!” Charlotte York as seen on SNL), so many puns! —I literally stopped reading (kept jerking off) to figure out Ballmark Card! — and the weird flex to the Marvel universe in that EVERYone has double initials! But it’s also hot. I love SS. CC in the Stall trading off between two dicks. (OH he’s a private dick. Not a private dic. Classic!) all of the veins and girth descriptions and descriptions of where the cum landed. It’s so very sexy. But your premise and execution maintains the overall silliness of the “noir gai” And I Am HERE for it. (I really do want to turn this into a spoken word performance/recording of this. It SCREAM for an audio book.
LoveMaleAsssssss
8/17/22, 3:41 AM
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8/17/22, 1:19 AM
E - I love lactation