Recent Comments

8/11/22, 8:11 PM
Loving this slow burn!
8/11/22, 7:48 PM
This is one of my favorite setups. I hope we get to see what depratvities this new programming has awakened in the innocent students…
Art
8/11/22, 6:42 PM
I agree with all of the above. I would only add that more description of the jocks involved would be nice. Yes, more chapters would be appreciated.
8/11/22, 3:54 PM
I love the concept, but it all feels a little rushed. Maybe a little more development and detail.
Anonymous
8/11/22, 3:41 PM
that’s two hot transformations… epically written!!!
Jun 4, 2022
Anonymous
8/11/22, 3:19 PM
hot concept… and amazingly brought to life!!!
8/11/22, 2:56 PM
Wonder when's the next one

Blackjinx123
8/11/22, 3:02 PM
@Erratic101, if all goes well I plan to post it this weekend.
Anonymous
8/11/22, 2:57 PM
really enjoying feeling Tanners enjoyment playing with Peter… another great chapter!!!
8/11/22, 2:00 PM
They both hugged in the end! This episode was so wonderfully silly! I laughed really hard at this: “Who’s there?!” Called the ghost, sounding just like Cliff the motel owner. “Have some juice!” Himbo said, hurling the wet brick into the dark room with all his might. The whole chapter was simply fantastic, and kinky! A wonderful addition to the series, and the boys had a great time together. Also, all the "dude"s were fantastic.

8/11/22, 2:03 PM
@Essex I'm glad you liked it! It had me wheezing :joy:
8/11/22, 7:27 AM
I think there is a foundation for a good story here, for a first story it's solid for sure! I think the transformation idea, a towel at the gym is really good. My biggest critique is grammar, some of the sentences are a bit long and more difficult to read, and a few commas would help to break that up. Welcome to the site and i look forward to seeing more of your work!

8/11/22, 12:46 PM
Thank you for your input