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8/11/22, 2:00 PM
They both hugged in the end! This episode was so wonderfully silly! I laughed really hard at this: “Who’s there?!” Called the ghost, sounding just like Cliff the motel owner. “Have some juice!” Himbo said, hurling the wet brick into the dark room with all his might. The whole chapter was simply fantastic, and kinky! A wonderful addition to the series, and the boys had a great time together. Also, all the "dude"s were fantastic.

8/11/22, 2:03 PM
@Essex I'm glad you liked it! It had me wheezing :joy:
8/11/22, 7:27 AM
I think there is a foundation for a good story here, for a first story it's solid for sure! I think the transformation idea, a towel at the gym is really good. My biggest critique is grammar, some of the sentences are a bit long and more difficult to read, and a few commas would help to break that up. Welcome to the site and i look forward to seeing more of your work!

8/11/22, 12:46 PM
Thank you for your input
8/11/22, 12:45 PM
Damn so hot. Great chapter! Can’t wait to see what happens to James.
8/11/22, 12:10 PM
i am a total musk guy... all man smells. I love them. So, this story completely made me crazy-horny! I loved it. I wanted to smell Scott so badly! thank you for the writing. I loved it. MORE musk - man smell stories.

8/11/22, 12:40 PM
@MChicago just you wait I’ve got something else I’m thinking of/in the works I’m sure you’ll love
8/11/22, 9:52 AM
looking forward to ...
8/11/22, 9:52 AM
great thing
8/11/22, 1:36 AM
I'm not into puppy play at all but this story was sweet and very telling about appearance and the judgemental but too short. I wanted to see more about their physical presence and Benji's transformation into the pup he was. Why did the mask burn? Was it a transformation? This had me imagining all of the possibiities. very sexy and sweet! 5 stars all around. I too would love to read more about their relationship and roles and hopefully finding they need each other!

8/11/22, 9:22 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you for all the feedback! I was thinking, maybe I should make a chapter where Benji has to go to the center to get a health check-up or something, so David goes on a tour over the facility, that way I can describe the changes more. What do you think?
8/11/22, 7:47 AM
Intrigued to see where this story is going. I love a gradual shift!
8/11/22, 4:57 AM
This is so hot thanks for writing
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8/11/22, 3:18 AM
This story hit the spot. Thank you.