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8/11/22, 9:52 AM
looking forward to ...
8/11/22, 9:52 AM
great thing
8/11/22, 1:36 AM
I'm not into puppy play at all but this story was sweet and very telling about appearance and the judgemental but too short. I wanted to see more about their physical presence and Benji's transformation into the pup he was. Why did the mask burn? Was it a transformation? This had me imagining all of the possibiities. very sexy and sweet! 5 stars all around. I too would love to read more about their relationship and roles and hopefully finding they need each other!

8/11/22, 9:22 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you for all the feedback! I was thinking, maybe I should make a chapter where Benji has to go to the center to get a health check-up or something, so David goes on a tour over the facility, that way I can describe the changes more. What do you think?
8/11/22, 7:47 AM
Intrigued to see where this story is going. I love a gradual shift!
8/11/22, 4:57 AM
This is so hot thanks for writing
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8/11/22, 3:18 AM
This story hit the spot. Thank you.
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8/11/22, 3:08 AM
Excellent erotic writing as always, Ventage.
8/11/22, 3:04 AM
I really love this series. Enjoying everything about it so far.
8/11/22, 1:43 AM
I like D I think he should get pregnant but not just by one father. He should get pregnant by every father who had a daughter impregnated by him. All at the same time. A big belly to balance out the big booty
8/11/22, 1:03 AM
Oh wow I'm so excited to see what happens next!