Recent Comments

fry
8/11/22, 9:40 PM
Has something happened to Brian? Has the story been abandoned?:pleading_face:
RD
8/11/22, 8:32 PM
Sorry to bother you again man. You are an outstanding writer but you have mistaken a name again. In this sentence "Ryan feel like he did when learned of Ryan and Alex’s betrayal" Instead of Ryan and Alex is Greg and Alex. Thanks for givin us a great time with your stories!
8/11/22, 8:11 PM
Loving this slow burn!
8/11/22, 7:48 PM
This is one of my favorite setups. I hope we get to see what depratvities this new programming has awakened in the innocent students…
Art
8/11/22, 6:42 PM
I agree with all of the above. I would only add that more description of the jocks involved would be nice. Yes, more chapters would be appreciated.
8/11/22, 3:54 PM
I love the concept, but it all feels a little rushed. Maybe a little more development and detail.
Anonymous
8/11/22, 3:41 PM
that’s two hot transformations… epically written!!!
Jun 4, 2022
Anonymous
8/11/22, 3:19 PM
hot concept… and amazingly brought to life!!!
8/11/22, 2:56 PM
Wonder when's the next one

Blackjinx123
8/11/22, 3:02 PM
@Erratic101, if all goes well I plan to post it this weekend.
Anonymous
8/11/22, 2:57 PM
really enjoying feeling Tanners enjoyment playing with Peter… another great chapter!!!