Recent Comments

8/11/22, 12:00 AM
Nice work! Great concept and hot scene.
nycboot
8/10/22, 10:47 PM
Brings you right into the character. I can't believe you wrote this entire story on your phone!
8/10/22, 9:57 PM
What a lovely story! Put a smile on my face. Would love to read a chapter 2; either continuing Benji's story or more from the adoption agency.

8/10/22, 10:03 PM
@GoonNoob Thank you for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it! The second chapter is already in the making, the story will focus around Benji and his owner
8/10/22, 9:42 PM
In my view, you can't go wrong with "the wrestling team goes gay" -- well done!
8/10/22, 8:52 PM
Loving your story! Great idea
Martin
8/10/22, 8:47 PM
Interesting start! Let's see what's going to happen...
Anonymous
8/10/22, 7:37 PM
So hot, love Arab men! I can't wait to see where you take this story next, maybe race change?

8/10/22, 8:39 PM
For the moment, this story will move away from the magic and focus on scenarios that could happen in real life.
8/10/22, 6:46 PM
Thank you so much for this chapter. Peter and Tanner is by far the best part of this story. I much prefer this slower corruption and twisted logic rather than the abrupt changes happening to the other families. The fact that Peter actually truely thinks that it is working, that he feels clean and absolved after doing something so obviously wrong and disturbing is so terrifying. He even did it fully aware of Tanner being right there in the room. He has no idea how far he has fallen. I also really like the whole part about the underage drinking. Compared to some of the explicit sexual content that we have had in the latest chapters it might seem smale scale and boring to some but is is still a mayor change to the pastors personality. He is being corrupted with more than just incest. Please keep the chapters coming. The wait is far to long.
Anonymous
8/10/22, 7:40 PM
Such a good and well-written chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next.