Recent Comments

8/7/22, 3:47 AM
The story is great, but seems more of an idea of a story, or rather, it is a submission for somebody to take for another story. This chapter seems unfinished, but the idea is amazing. I believe it would wise to combine chapter 1 and 2 because it is still the same thought process, and not technically another chapter just because night and morning happening in between. A complete change of an idea is what creates different chapters. Plus I would love to read more of Ethan's life and how he became a pervert. Granted, since this site doesn't allow podophilic stories that could be difficult. I would love to find a website that allows sexual relations with minors since it add an intensity, or also a way to decompress fantasies in a legal way. Granted, I don't know dark websites so I choose to read stories as a way to decompress and it is difficult to find those besides nifty.org

8/7/22, 4:34 AM
@Rhinoman I'm sorry to be rude, but why are you trying to talk about this topic here? As you yourself note, this site doesn't allow stories about this topic, this story has absolutely nothing to do with this topic that you just brought up out of the blue, and it's probably not a good idea to hijack the comment thread to talk about it, especially not to (apparently) try to source other websites that have stuff on the topic.

Anonymous
8/9/22, 7:09 AM
@Retrofantasia Firstly, this is a thread to MY topic that I wrote in a story page. Secondly, my comment talking about pedophilic content was a warning towards _if_ there was a prequel in regards to the main character. Thirdly, my source, or citing, is called building up credibility or reference to other authors in regards to my feedback. People do this so you'll understand better what a person is trying to communicate. Fourth, I'm not trying to be rude or start any kind of argument/debate (cause you just misunderstood. I assume because you read _pedophilic_ and almost had a stroke cause it was even mentioned. Which, by the way, ephebophile would had been the correct word for me to had wrote.) I simply gave feedback on the work. The comment section, and I might be wrong, isn't to just say "Oh damn, wish that was me..." All I wanted was to give a critique. My wonder of wanting to read about minors is simply about someone at 18-19 yrs of age, but most go 20+ yrs. So its hard to find them without it being ephebophilic/podophilic. Perhaps I could had been more clear.
8/6/22, 12:28 PM
Super hot chapter

8/9/22, 3:40 AM
Thank you! @Human Dragon Fruit
8/9/22, 3:26 AM
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8/9/22, 1:43 AM
Awwww coach Tom deserves a sweet houseboy for all that he does for his team :)
Anonymous
8/8/22, 10:25 PM
This is incredibly hot! So worth the wait. Thank you so much!!!
Anonymous
8/8/22, 9:35 PM
Loved it!!