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Anonymous
8/6/22, 11:36 PM
I am reading again and again I still can see that there is no next chapter button 😭 Author, bless me with another chapter please
8/6/22, 10:05 PM
I know is expecting too much, but its strange when people become dumber and still have perfect grammar in Spanish. But great story, thank you

8/6/22, 10:42 PM
@Orc-Br too be fair, as an English speaker, if I did bad Spanish grammar I'd have Latinos in my comments tell me how shit my Spanish is so it's a no win situation XD XD
Scott Grimes
8/6/22, 8:56 PM
Truly hot, truly funny. Sparkling combination. I really look forward to seeing more.
Jul 3, 2022
Gingcub
8/6/22, 8:22 PM
Holy hell! I want more stories like this. So hot all those guys becoming slaves to their penises!
8/6/22, 7:31 PM
Very very hot story I love it must finish it later can't go out with a hard on
8/6/22, 5:45 PM
Amazingly well done. Such fantastic physical descriptions alongside engaging characters. Loving every minute, and can't wait for more!
8/6/22, 2:24 PM
Bloody hell this was hot. It just got hotter and hotter. The muscle growth is so well done. I love that he grows out of his shirt. And I love that he makes the wish to make his lower body match his upper. And wow about how he reacts to the muscle himself. You did a great job of how Freddy feels it, both on his own and then how he understands how he is perceived at the grocery store. Not to be left out, he grows his own dick which is also mega hot. I love the way it grows and how he feels that too. And how Uri stares at it at first. I love how deftly you wrote both of the characters. Uri is a selfish jerk, but not evil. Freddy is deluding himself still. He was secretly hoping a bigger package would make him hornier. He can’t get hard until he thinks of Uri masturbating thinking of him, but continues thinking of himself as boring, straight and narrow. The wish at the end was super hot too. I’m so excited to see how it affects Freddy moving forward. Also waiting for Uri to point out how one sided the wishes have been, even if he’s been enjoying them. And I’m eagerly looking forward to Freddy finally giving into his dominant side and bossing Uri around, for both of their benefits. I bet Uri won’t mind scrubbing the shower or mopping the floor if Freddy orders him to, and then rewards him by letting him suck Freddy’s dick. Especially if they both agree to Uri being able to orgasm just by sucking dick. That line of thinking totally reminds me of the scene in Edits and Corrections where Gabe tells Sam to deal with the problem he created. Freddy telling Uri to suck his dick since it’s Uri’s fault it’s always hard now would be very very hot. Oh, I’m wondering if Bryant will show up again somehow. That was a nice other character to throw in briefly. And led to more attention peanut butter shenanigans lol. Like Uri gets lots of free kickbacks, but they’re all peanut butter.

8/6/22, 5:35 PM
@MonsterMash62 100% agree
8/6/22, 4:44 PM
Story seemed rushed, and a lot of disconnects between Mike and the other two characters treating him as a pig. There needs to be more raunchy descriptions, and vulgarity in the characters to exemplify the persona of a biker/trucker/mike. Also, Wizard is used too many times in the beginning when it's lost later on in the story. I believe it would be better to use descriptions to illude to being a wizard rather than explicitly saying it. It seems like you haven't had an actual experience having sex with a trucker/biker/"redneck?" to extrapolate into a fictional story. The story is great for a fast read, but it doesn't exceed into the real darker side of a fantasy. Go harder on describing the experience. This often means writing a lot, and minimalize but without losing the real hard raunchy moments to drive it home; Then add in elements that give a nasty twist by illuding to something to give the reader a shameful hope that something is going to happen and follow up with a realistic-fantasy dark and raunchy delivery. Otherwise, its a good skeleton.
Anonymous
8/6/22, 4:22 PM
I need to see what happens between a full blooded Asian and his mixed race half-brother who despises his heritage. Please. 🥰
8/6/22, 4:12 PM
So hot. Can’t wait to read more!