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musclejunkie
8/6/22, 5:11 AM
THIS LAST PAGE WAS INSANE COMPARED TO YOUR WRITING STYLE BEFORE. WAY TOO MUCH HAPPENED. CHARACTERS SHOW UP FROM NOWHERE WITH NO BACK STORY EXPLAINING THEIR INTENTION OR WHAT THEY WERE THINKING. THERE'S A SIDE STORY AROUND ZACH I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE EXPLORED MORE SINCE HE WAS TALKING TO SOMEONE ON THE HELMET .. OR WAS IT JAYS MIND FUCKING WITH HIM? THE SONS HAVE ANOTHER SIDE STORY I WOULD HAVE LIKED TO EXPLORE MORE AND UNDERSTAND THEIR MINDS AND EMOTIONS BETTER. MAYBE YOU RUSHED TO GET IT DONE .. BUT YOU WENT TO 100MPH IN 3.5 SEC AND I FEEL LIKE YOU LEFT ME BEHIND FOR SURE. I CAN'T SPEAK FOR EVERYONE BUT I ASSUME THE SAME WITH OTHERS. YOUR STYLE OF WRITING IS GREAT AND ENGAGING BUT THIS LAST CHAPTER HAD ME HELLA LOST. WHICH IS A SHAME CUZ YOUD BUILT UP TO THE ACTUAL FUCK SCENE AND INSTEAD OF BEING TURNED ON AND EXCITED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENED .. IT WAS DISTRACTING AF AS CHARACTERS APPEARED RANDOMLY AND LOOSE ENDS WERE LEFT FLAILING INT HE WIND COMPLETELY UNANSWERED

8/6/22, 5:13 AM
@musclejunkie this is the chapter the story merges with my Monsterlands series, if you haven't read it this chapter can be distracted,
8/6/22, 2:53 AM
So cool to see the new chapter, and it was great! Loved the trucker scene, his subsumed mindset was really hot. Can't wait to see payback for the uppity entitled boys.
GdStPete, FL
8/6/22, 2:14 AM
WOW... This is my 1st time summing here... god I wish this were true.... Author 'TieMeEdgeMe' appears to be a REAL, GOOD yet young Master !! Wish we lived closer,,,, His writing is Intense... and accurate... 'maybe' I'll visit AZ... tho personally my focus now, 8/2022 is So FL and San Diego.. His skillful imagination and what appears on his FetLife pg inticate he KNOWS what the hell to do..... OR... maybe HE/the should move to Tampa/St Pete..... Keep the KinkS humming !!!! .. PS = YES Let's truly research chastity drinks.. There IS a market for this !!!!! ( I'm GdStPete on Recon . com ) Seeking play mates, Switches Chastity and electro and more !!
8/6/22, 12:14 AM
Loved this! Don’t know if you are continuing it, but I like to imagine that B and D, after months, years, of dating, fall deeply in love. But with time, they realize the spark is fading. After much contemplation… maybe even seeing a queer therapist, they realize that the “spark” was literally the dates. Unable to dare each other, they realize that to keep their love alive, they both need to crawl back to Master to become his permanent full time dare-slaves. Mmmmmmm
8/5/22, 11:31 PM
Holy shit, S.Q. Neemie...this is UNBELIEVABLY well thought out and erotic. I'm so so so happy you've come back to this story. Fuck, I had no idea where it was going and didn't expect a 'boxer-pussy' at all. You are a genius; so impressed constantly with your inventive and well written stories. Good Lord, you tick every single box I've got when it comes to this stuff. Endlessly impressed.
8/5/22, 10:37 PM
So hot!! Great chapter
8/5/22, 10:29 PM
It's very good. :relieved:

8/5/22, 10:31 PM
@Daisy I. B. de Melcker Thank you!
7/17/22, 7:36 AM
We've got drama, intrigue, dilfs. Amazing!

8/5/22, 10:23 PM
@Norismo Key ingredients 😌
6/29/22, 3:06 AM
Please continue!

8/5/22, 10:23 PM
@Cutlerfan It will happen! In good time 😅. Thanks for reading :D
Bobby
6/28/22, 12:55 PM
Great story. Remember reading quite a bit ago and was always hoping for a part 2.

8/5/22, 10:22 PM
@Bobby Thanks so much! Apologies for the long wait but rest assured there will be a part 2 SomedayTM.