Recent Comments

7/17/22, 7:36 AM
We've got drama, intrigue, dilfs. Amazing!

8/5/22, 10:23 PM
@Norismo Key ingredients 😌
6/29/22, 3:06 AM
Please continue!

8/5/22, 10:23 PM
@Cutlerfan It will happen! In good time πŸ˜…. Thanks for reading :D
Bobby
6/28/22, 12:55 PM
Great story. Remember reading quite a bit ago and was always hoping for a part 2.

8/5/22, 10:22 PM
@Bobby Thanks so much! Apologies for the long wait but rest assured there will be a part 2 SomedayTM.
6/27/22, 6:00 PM
Nice opening, and the promise of something more. Good start!

8/5/22, 10:21 PM
@Essex Indeed it was always meant to have a continuation before life and things got in the way 😁
6/27/22, 12:28 AM
Intriguing. Proceed....

8/5/22, 10:20 PM
@Rock Creek Werewolf Thank you! :D I do mean to continue this at some point.
8/5/22, 9:17 PM
Really getting a strong Stephen King vibe here as we get introduced to the broad canvas of characters. I loved the scene with the trucker, and I'm excited to see how this ooze spreads!
KJP
8/5/22, 9:11 PM
Fantastic!!! Hope there is more!
8/5/22, 9:02 PM
Wow! Incredible! I love the characterization of the collegiate four, and the themes of indigenous ownership that you explore with Dakota. Could it be that the Spirit of the Lake is going to use him as a conduit for revenge? I cannot wait to see!
8/3/22, 2:36 AM
Hot Damn! Well written. Please continue. I want to hear how this angels became dominated and taken. Because they have some kinky overlords as masters.

8/3/22, 4:04 AM
@Marik29 That is altogether too kind of you. Believe me, this is simply the beginning. I have big plans for the rise of the Over-Master. Any kinks you'd particularly welcome?

8/3/22, 8:37 PM
@AngelSpanker, you have already hit on a few: Dominating, subjugation/enslavement, chasity, toys (dildo). And it seems a lot of these enslaved angels are muscular which is another big hit! And please keep 'sexualizing' a lot of what the angels must do. Like how this one had to sit on a dildo that seemed to have a mind of its own just to right in a book. I would recommend expanding the use of toys and gear such as collars, leash, leather/rubber, hoods, gags, etc. I'm really eager to read how they submitted and went through their conditioning. What do you think?

8/3/22, 8:42 PM
@Marik29 We seem to be of one mind. I like how you think. This is going to be a bit of a history, so I don't want to give too much away. Suffice it to say, it will definitely involve a _(lot)_ of haughty, stuck-up angelic tossers getting put in their place. If that means that legendary heroes and supreme warriors are humiliated, owned, and spanked until they cry, then so much the better.

8/3/22, 8:56 PM
πŸ‘πŸΏπŸ‘πŸΏπŸ‘πŸΏ@Marik29

8/4/22, 6:02 AM
@AngelSpanker @Marik29 This looks very nice. Me likes it a lot! This prologue by itself made me very hard (and would have made me cum If I hadn't refrained from it) and the kinks listed in this comment line are very nice too. Please please please keep on writing.

8/4/22, 7:40 AM
@Nephilim How kind of you to say! If I've gotten at always one person going, it hasn't been time wasted. And good on you for the restraint.

8/5/22, 8:22 PM
Also tattoos@U.K. guy
8/5/22, 5:15 PM
Will this be continued? I'd love to read what happens to this new rubber slave!