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8/5/22, 10:37 PM
So hot!! Great chapter
8/5/22, 10:29 PM
It's very good. :relieved:

8/5/22, 10:31 PM
@Daisy I. B. de Melcker Thank you!
7/17/22, 7:36 AM
We've got drama, intrigue, dilfs. Amazing!

8/5/22, 10:23 PM
@Norismo Key ingredients 😌
6/29/22, 3:06 AM
Please continue!

8/5/22, 10:23 PM
@Cutlerfan It will happen! In good time 😅. Thanks for reading :D
Bobby
6/28/22, 12:55 PM
Great story. Remember reading quite a bit ago and was always hoping for a part 2.

8/5/22, 10:22 PM
@Bobby Thanks so much! Apologies for the long wait but rest assured there will be a part 2 SomedayTM.
6/27/22, 6:00 PM
Nice opening, and the promise of something more. Good start!

8/5/22, 10:21 PM
@Essex Indeed it was always meant to have a continuation before life and things got in the way 😁
6/27/22, 12:28 AM
Intriguing. Proceed....

8/5/22, 10:20 PM
@Rock Creek Werewolf Thank you! :D I do mean to continue this at some point.
8/5/22, 9:17 PM
Really getting a strong Stephen King vibe here as we get introduced to the broad canvas of characters. I loved the scene with the trucker, and I'm excited to see how this ooze spreads!
KJP
8/5/22, 9:11 PM
Fantastic!!! Hope there is more!
8/5/22, 9:02 PM
Wow! Incredible! I love the characterization of the collegiate four, and the themes of indigenous ownership that you explore with Dakota. Could it be that the Spirit of the Lake is going to use him as a conduit for revenge? I cannot wait to see!