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8/4/22, 4:11 AM
The TF scenes were very well done. And I do love a good happy ending.
8/4/22, 3:04 AM
You left us in such a point... great potential, looking forward to it!
8/4/22, 2:19 AM
Great idea...endless possibilities! more please!
8/4/22, 1:44 AM
So glad to see a new chapter! Greg is still amazing, and it's too bad that Alex quickly lost Eli, but he seems ready to move on. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/3/22, 8:12 PM
Tough to believe this story is 4 years old now. Still one of my favorites. I love how quickly it gets into it, without wasting words explaining the device when the details don’t matter. And I love how the narrator changes slowly then quickly. And I love how he gets dumbed down. And that he gets super hot.

8/4/22, 12:16 AM
Thanks @MonsterMash62! I wrote this one summer when I kept catching glances of seriously hot dudes just walking around town. Every description from the intro is lifted straight from reality. I wish this app could really exist. Five stars for sure.
8/3/22, 11:49 PM
Are you ever going to continue this?
8/3/22, 11:38 PM
Dude, your stuff is so good!
8/1/22, 4:59 AM
Hi! loving this start, however I suppose you know there's a similar story here with a similar set of characters around here (Just mentioning that because it's one I remember fondly since the author hasn't updated in a while), of course it's nothing bad on it's own and I see you are making the narrative yours, just saying I'm really looking forward for you to continue making this an amazing story, your writing style seems interesting to me. Keep it up!! xxxx

Hypnoboy
8/3/22, 1:45 AM
No I wasn’t at all aware of that, what is the story called? @Kristalmaster

8/3/22, 7:27 PM
@Hypnoboy Oh, sorry then for bringing that up, for me these characters remind me a lot of those in Blackjinx123's "Thicker than water" series (Available on GSS and recently updated) where main character Vincent has two older and abusive brothers (One who physically abuses him and another one who verbally abuses him) and a father that doesn't care, Vincent also lost his mother (Difference being Vincent is not adopted like Charlie) and uses a form of mind control to turn the tables on them. Again sorry if this is probably just one big coincidence and didn't mean to imply there's any way of relationship except that the characters reminded me of those previously mentioned. I do think this story is unequivocally yours in your writing style and how you're developing it. Loving it and looking forward to what's next!
8/3/22, 7:21 PM
will we see part 2 soon?
8/3/22, 7:08 PM
Great series. I enjoy the continuing theme.