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8/4/22, 2:19 AM
Great idea...endless possibilities! more please!
8/4/22, 1:44 AM
So glad to see a new chapter! Greg is still amazing, and it's too bad that Alex quickly lost Eli, but he seems ready to move on. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/3/22, 8:12 PM
Tough to believe this story is 4 years old now. Still one of my favorites. I love how quickly it gets into it, without wasting words explaining the device when the details don’t matter. And I love how the narrator changes slowly then quickly. And I love how he gets dumbed down. And that he gets super hot.

8/4/22, 12:16 AM
Thanks @MonsterMash62! I wrote this one summer when I kept catching glances of seriously hot dudes just walking around town. Every description from the intro is lifted straight from reality. I wish this app could really exist. Five stars for sure.
8/3/22, 11:49 PM
Are you ever going to continue this?
8/3/22, 11:38 PM
Dude, your stuff is so good!
8/1/22, 4:59 AM
Hi! loving this start, however I suppose you know there's a similar story here with a similar set of characters around here (Just mentioning that because it's one I remember fondly since the author hasn't updated in a while), of course it's nothing bad on it's own and I see you are making the narrative yours, just saying I'm really looking forward for you to continue making this an amazing story, your writing style seems interesting to me. Keep it up!! xxxx

Hypnoboy
8/3/22, 1:45 AM
No I wasn’t at all aware of that, what is the story called? @Kristalmaster

8/3/22, 7:27 PM
@Hypnoboy Oh, sorry then for bringing that up, for me these characters remind me a lot of those in Blackjinx123's "Thicker than water" series (Available on GSS and recently updated) where main character Vincent has two older and abusive brothers (One who physically abuses him and another one who verbally abuses him) and a father that doesn't care, Vincent also lost his mother (Difference being Vincent is not adopted like Charlie) and uses a form of mind control to turn the tables on them. Again sorry if this is probably just one big coincidence and didn't mean to imply there's any way of relationship except that the characters reminded me of those previously mentioned. I do think this story is unequivocally yours in your writing style and how you're developing it. Loving it and looking forward to what's next!
8/3/22, 7:21 PM
will we see part 2 soon?
8/3/22, 7:08 PM
Great series. I enjoy the continuing theme.
Anonymous
8/3/22, 5:57 PM
Ready to see him humiliate Mason so bad!
8/2/22, 8:43 PM
Wow what a fun read! Most excited I've been by a series in a good while. I think it says a lot about a writer's ability if they can make a trope feel fresh. I've read a good number of sex plant stories, tribesmen sex slave stories, and I feel like one or two that also do both, but this was by far the best. For me, the gaping holes, the stars on the nipples, and the cock shrink /cages really made this 12/10. Well done, I'll be riding this high for a couple days lol. The only thing that would've checked off a couple more boxes for me is if you had Connor or the other guys occasionally orgasm from getting fucked - this is a little hotter to me than it seeming to be primarily a chemical high. (But that's really just about preference, probably some people are more into the addiction side of it). And/or if the getting fucked from the big cocks caused some prostate milking or pissing. But these are really more of a preference thing than general feedback. I think I would've blacked out had you had Connor and Trevor fully cum during the ritual when they were pressed together, or during the dp. So hot... Thank you!

8/2/22, 10:58 PM
@Dreamweavr wow what a wonderful comment to come home to! I love writing handsfree orgasms from being fucked but for this story it was important that none of them came during their enslavement, but i understand the love of it, and yeah, if they were gonna cum at all during this story, it would have been when Connor and Trevor were being fucked by the Chief and A'sheeq. If you love anal orgasms, I can recommend **From Thieves to Thong Fags** and this story's sequel **Two Tops make a Bottom** from my catalogue ;)

8/3/22, 5:53 PM
@GoonNoob yeah I think it would've added another level of objectification / loss of control to it if part of the lovemaking ritual was forcing your slave conduits to orgasm. Maybe resulting in some really desiring to be used that way. I don't know why but Two Tops and Thong Fags didn't hold my interest like this story did. I had read them before but couldn't stay interested past the second chapter. Wish I had better feedback for you, I just couldn't really stick with them.