Recent Comments

8/2/22, 7:31 PM
Thank you for all the comments! I didn't want to seem too thirsty during the competition, but they made me feel good. I doubt I'll continue this story seeing as it took so much just to write what's here. Feel free to continue, if you get the inspiration. I tried writing original stories for past competitions but couldn't finish them. By converting one of my fave mcstories stories I was able to see it through. If I start writing original characters, I can always change my name. thank you for reading.
8/2/22, 7:08 PM
Let me be the new skin-slave
8/2/22, 7:03 PM
Amazing! This completely new character shows your skill as an author, since Victor is similar to Luke in build, but completely different in personality: cocky, overtly sexual, forward, and a deliberate tease. And I must admit that I *love* seeing the spoilers—it means that Luke and Sammy end up together and happy, with Luke’s condition under control. So not only do we get a massively hot story, we get confirmation that things will be OK in your other amazing piece. Two wonderful tales for the price of one! :D You’re a fantastic author. :)
DB
8/2/22, 7:01 PM
What a great series. Once started I had to read every chapter…with little interruption. Felt my cock leaking from the first one.
7/29/22, 12:12 AM
I'm sorry, and I know this is on me for reading this. I should've stopped when I saw what direction this story was going, but I kept hoping that it would turn out happier. I just can't stand the thought of Carter being twisted into this thing he isn't permanently. But I understand that for plenty of other people on this site transformation like that, himbofication and someone becoming an obedient pet, is a really big turn on. I understand completely if this comment gets removed, I just needed a place to put this. Reading this story just really spiked my anxiety and I don't know why. I'm sorry.

7/29/22, 2:05 AM
@Tiena No worries! This story isn't going to have a dark ending, but definitely don't keep reading if the changes make you anxious. Most of my stories are lighter than this one, but Magic Textbook in particular might be more up your alley.

8/2/22, 6:57 PM
@bluesuedewho Thank you for being so understanding, I really shouldn't have posted that comment in the first place. Apparently I just had no impulse control that day :sweat: This story overall is extremely hot (especially the image of the muscular Carter becoming an extremely hungry and submissive bottom). The part that was triggering for me was how focused Rusty was on making Carter dumb while Carter repeatedly and loudly says that he doesn't want to be dumb. Something about that just really got to me, not sure why. I also wanted to say that I think you're a fantastic writer. I've read a bunch of the other stuff you've written, and I'm a fan— _Quantum Love_ and _The Cook Off_ in particular are my favorites. Apologies if I'm oversharing again. Looking forward to seeing whatever you write next!
8/2/22, 4:32 PM
gret story!thx
8/2/22, 3:55 PM
I imagined that Michael/Mick was me. Hope to read more!
8/1/22, 7:41 PM
I love isekai anime, so awesome that you took the concept and made it in to filth ;)

8/1/22, 7:48 PM
@GoonNoob Thanks! I see the titles all the time and wanted to do a riff on them.

8/2/22, 11:47 AM
@nothingamonth lol
8/2/22, 11:10 AM
I just started the series and damn. I thought I'd read up to current but I didn't last 2 chapters...

8/2/22, 11:23 AM
@Dreamweavr haha i'll take that as a compliment. Try again in an hour lol
8/2/22, 10:14 AM
So good! Both incredibly hot and funny. And with heart. Thank you!