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8/2/22, 8:22 PM
You're baaaaaaack

Blackjinx123
8/3/22, 3:51 AM
@Erratic101, I am! Thanks so much for all the love!
8/2/22, 9:38 PM
What a delightful surprise to have you back! I really missed this series <3

Blackjinx123
8/3/22, 3:50 AM
@Udems, happy to be back. Thank you so much, I missed writing it!
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8/2/22, 2:01 PM
Thank you for continuing this story line.

Blackjinx123
8/3/22, 3:49 AM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, you are most welcome!
8/2/22, 7:48 AM
Happy to see that this series has returned.

Blackjinx123
8/3/22, 3:48 AM
@Norismo, glad to be back! Thanks so much for the support :D
Just Some Dude
8/3/22, 3:25 AM
Fuck the happy endings! I like the kinky endings. And let me tell ya: THAT was kinky. I think more people than you would expect prefer it when the heroes end up falling into a life of complete sexual depravity, me being one of them (duh). Looking forward to that epilogue where Booker gets his just deserts 😈😈😈
7/31/22, 7:25 PM
That's not what emotional abuse is. Chris being kind to Charlie but not returning his feelings is not emotional abuse. Chris standing up for Charlie isn't cruel. Chris talking about his girlfriend to his brother isn't some evil act. Charlie comes across as unlikable, entitled, and pretentious. I don't know how or why you tried to vilify the only character being good and kind to the protagonist, but it makes Charlie come across as a horrible person. Please familiarize yourself with concepts of emotional abuse before trying to tackle them. It takes me out of the story to see such a wild mangling of a serious issue in order to set up porn. The writing itself is fine, but the motivations and justification for what Charlie is going to do to Chris is very, very weak.

Hypnoboy
8/3/22, 1:47 AM
Charlie isn’t meant to be a good character. What he’s doing is objectively wrong. If it doesn’t seem like a valid reason to be upset with Chris, it’s because it isn’t. If he seems entitled or morally wrong it’s because he is acting in those ways. @Fattenupmen
8/3/22, 12:08 AM
Great ending! The story picked up quite a lot with Sam being introduced last chapter, and the final take over of boring Harry, extending to the worker Dad and Son and then to villages and more, was perfect. Great job!

8/3/22, 12:12 AM
@Essex Thanks for the kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Anonymous
8/2/22, 11:53 PM
wow this got very dark but damn was it super sexy and i love the piss element of it
Jul 3, 2022
8/2/22, 9:08 PM
How many offences do you think it would take before ending up under lock and key in this fine establishment?

8/2/22, 10:59 PM
@AngelSpanker 1 big offence or 69 lil ones ;)
8/2/22, 9:14 PM
Wow! Very interesting and great alternative ending for this story. I really liked the direction you took the story. I liked both endings equally, but for different reasons.