Recent Comments

8/3/22, 12:08 AM
Great ending! The story picked up quite a lot with Sam being introduced last chapter, and the final take over of boring Harry, extending to the worker Dad and Son and then to villages and more, was perfect. Great job!

8/3/22, 12:12 AM
@Essex Thanks for the kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Anonymous
8/2/22, 11:53 PM
wow this got very dark but damn was it super sexy and i love the piss element of it
Jul 3, 2022
8/2/22, 9:08 PM
How many offences do you think it would take before ending up under lock and key in this fine establishment?

8/2/22, 10:59 PM
@AngelSpanker 1 big offence or 69 lil ones ;)
8/2/22, 9:14 PM
Wow! Very interesting and great alternative ending for this story. I really liked the direction you took the story. I liked both endings equally, but for different reasons.
7/31/22, 10:04 AM
This was super hot, the way you described all that happened. I wish I could find someone to illustrate your story perfectly because there's enough description to paint a picture of what's happening. I'm kind of envious of Connor and Jared. What would I do to experience that!?

8/1/22, 7:44 PM
@Anima thanks! I was actually contemplating hiring an artist to show what the Qayllar looked like as I thought it might be hard for readers to imagine but I'm glad I've apparently painted a vivid enough picture for you ;)

8/2/22, 8:37 PM
@Anima yeah I agree, especially the stars in the nipples and the shrunken cock cages would be really hot.
6/24/22, 10:16 PM
Terrific story -- structure was great! Really enjoyed it!

8/2/22, 7:34 PM
@absman420 thank you! I've read and re-read all of your stories so this is quite a compliment.
8/2/22, 7:31 PM
Thank you for all the comments! I didn't want to seem too thirsty during the competition, but they made me feel good. I doubt I'll continue this story seeing as it took so much just to write what's here. Feel free to continue, if you get the inspiration. I tried writing original stories for past competitions but couldn't finish them. By converting one of my fave mcstories stories I was able to see it through. If I start writing original characters, I can always change my name. thank you for reading.
8/2/22, 7:08 PM
Let me be the new skin-slave
8/2/22, 7:03 PM
Amazing! This completely new character shows your skill as an author, since Victor is similar to Luke in build, but completely different in personality: cocky, overtly sexual, forward, and a deliberate tease. And I must admit that I *love* seeing the spoilers—it means that Luke and Sammy end up together and happy, with Luke’s condition under control. So not only do we get a massively hot story, we get confirmation that things will be OK in your other amazing piece. Two wonderful tales for the price of one! :D You’re a fantastic author. :)
DB
8/2/22, 7:01 PM
What a great series. Once started I had to read every chapter…with little interruption. Felt my cock leaking from the first one.