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misecu
8/2/22, 4:05 AM
Very hot. Please keep the story going. Would love to see Danny's brother taken and maybe his dad and friends. Love your writing style
7/31/22, 7:48 PM
I absolutely loved it.Thought it was a super fun ride. Love that you didn't backpedal on the himbofication but also found a way to make sure that Rusty got what he deserved :P

8/2/22, 12:34 AM
@fanboi214 Thanks! I have (non-immediate) plans to keep playing with both further ideas.

8/2/22, 2:47 AM
@bluesuedewho Woohoo! Well I'll be patiently waiting ;)
7/29/22, 8:36 PM
good to see CT-07 have a mention. I for one look forward to see what Conrad has done to him with his one to one training hope that transformation will be good and I agree no faces on show just full rubber drones

Rub.berized
7/29/22, 10:18 PM
@MalSkin I have something in mind for CT-07 and I hope many of you will like it. But be patient with me, I sometimes feel like having a good flow and sometimes I take weeks.

8/2/22, 2:17 AM
I'm super eager to hear more about him as well. Hoping we can get a look back at how he transformed rather than just seeing a final product
Anonymous
8/1/22, 12:28 PM
I love it. This story ended as well as I could have hoped. Happy ending in smut stories are extremely overrated and boring. If everything just goes back to the way things were there’s no impact. It also ended on a cliffhanger so people can entirely interpret what will happen on their own. It’s entirely possible he will decide to buy back his mental stats, even with lowered wits he recognizes that. If he wants to or not would be his choice at that point. I think this ended extremely perfectly. Another home run.

8/2/22, 1:00 AM
@ Thanks! I wanted to push myself to write some kinks I don't normally write with this one, along with a "bad ending" for this installment.
7/31/22, 11:03 AM
I'm conflicted. On the one hand, this chapter was super creative, both by the way the DnD system was used (especially the dick wand) and the way the twist was introduced was very clever. At first I thought you made a typo but then we discovered that it was a major turnaround. I hope Dusty will be a good/nice top, unlike Rusty, but since Rusty mentioned both of them should be dumb I'm not so sure. Yet on the same time I can't wait to know how it will affect him next. On the other hand, I hate it when the good guy is losing and Carter doesn't deserve his current state. It's true he still has 6 XP points now, but as Rusty said, by the time he'll be able to gather his thoughts, he'll be pumped with cum once again. There is one thing that I didn't understand: On the last chapter one user commented that there's a difference between "real Carter" and "RPG Carter", meaning that theoretically, when the game ends, Carter will be back to his old self since he is not his Character. Is this how it works? Can the game even end without Rusty's command? Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully Carter will get a happy ending and his mind back.

7/31/22, 11:06 AM
Just realized this is the last chapter (for now at least) which makes me really sad. Both because it ended and because this was a bad ending, since while it seems that Rusty will get what he deserves, Carter still ended up as what he tries not to be

7/31/22, 4:57 PM
@Reader That theory about them being different is just that, a theory really. Maybe the game enforces Carter to become his character and therefore think like a dumb jock slut despite his protests on not wanting to become what Rusty made it to be. Since this is the ending that has been decided on, it's perfectly fine to think that Carter just announces that he "QUITS" the game. Any player can quit a game they don't like after all, not even the gamemaster can force a player to keep playing.

7/31/22, 6:02 PM
@Reader Yeah, this is about where I'm at with it. It was very fun, and very well-written. It just feels like we got the worst ending, for Carter, and that's a bit depressing.

8/1/22, 8:59 AM
@ChronoSeth You're right that we can change our head cannon, but a. I like to know the "truth" and b. Since Carter wasn't able to think about it until know, I doubt that in his current state he will be able to do so :slightly_frowning_face:. Plus, if I am not mistaken, at chapter one Carter says how he doesn't want to play yet he is still stuck in the game. @Lancelot Exactly. Since Carter ended up using his EXP to bump his ass stats, I kinda suspect that his fate was already sealed from the beginning (since the vast majority voted on the skills, and while we did get that, it means that we shouldn't have received the butt upgrade, but this is just me being conspiratorial.

8/1/22, 9:50 AM
@Reader Thats true yes. But Carter also didn't try to physically leave the scene. It showed in his heart that he was willing to try it out when he himself didn't figuratively escape the tabletop. This story would have a bit more hope if Carter actually tried to buy back a point of intelligence rather than stupidly sit idle and accept that any point of mind stats he buys is gonna be drained out and give him TRIPLE EXP.

8/1/22, 11:48 AM
@ChronoSeth You have a point there. Carter talks about buying INT point but never actually does (and it can be argued that since this isn't a new thought, he doesn't need his wits to understand that). However in his defense his senses are overwhelmed and and when Rusty does "worldbuilding" he makes him unhinged. It still strange that he didn't start with buying INT before buying some assets (pun intended), but I guess we wouldn't have a story otherwise. I don't mind low points cliff hangers if I know that there's going to be a happy ending and that there are some chapters ahead, but since the story is over for now it's stuck. I tried to understand if the continuation of the con arc is going to be about R,D&C, or if it's going to be about other events taking place in the con. Either way it doesn't sound like Carter's situation is going to get better any time soon (if at all).

8/2/22, 12:50 AM
@Reader Thanks for the comment! The story isn't over, I just need to take a break, and part of that was getting to a temporary stopping point.
easdf
8/1/22, 8:53 AM
I would be totally fine if Carter would have ended up loving to bottom and wanting to be bred, but leaving him dumb (and well, being unable to think barely at all can be considered that in my opinion) is just depressing. Throughout the whole story we saw how Carter didn't deserve any of this. At the beginning he had every right to say no to bottoming, and we can see that even at the top of his mental transformation, what he feared the most is being dumb, so leaving him that way feels uncalled for. Technically we can believe that Dusty would change it, but since we are told they would probably have the same skill, that Carter still yearns to be bred and that he doesn't have the mental capabilities to think about an idea in time, the chances of him regaining his wits and brain are bleak.

8/2/22, 12:49 AM
@easdf Thanks for reading! The story isn't over, just at a natural stopping point for me. I have ideas for playing around with brain stuff whenever I continue this.
8/1/22, 10:34 AM
I loved the story but I’m unsure about the ending. I wasn’t a big dusty fan and I wanted Rusty to dominate Carter and win but overall it was still a great story!

8/2/22, 12:47 AM
@ls1999 Thanks!
8/1/22, 4:35 AM
Hm. I'll keep checking these out as they come to see if the dynamic changes, but honestly I really won't enjoy this series until poor Carter is restored (at least partially). I think this story has an unusual problem I don't often find when reading stories on this site, which is that you actually did such a good job of making me care about the protagonist (and hating Rusty) that it's hurting the enjoyment in the end. Even if Rusty is punished by his duplicate, an unrestored Carter is just...depressing, not hot. Sorry to be a negative Nancy. Maybe your plan for future instalments involves a happy ending for Carter (and not just "I'm a dumb himbo and lost all my original personality but I'm happy" kind of "happy" ending), but until I see a true hint of that, I'm personally not gonna be a satisfied reader. But considering other people are enjoying it, that might just be my hangup. Which is totally fine! Every story on this site shouldn't be for everyone, so maybe this one just is not for people like me.

easdf
8/1/22, 8:47 AM
@AnonDragon Couldn't put it better myself

8/2/22, 12:46 AM
@AnonDragon I have big shakeups in mind, but I also desperately need to take a break from this story for a bit. I have other WIPs piling up. I'll probably do the same semi-interactive thing, but my broad plan for the characters is something a bit more involved than Carter ending up just a dumb jock or restored to exactly what he was before meeting Rusty.
Evan
8/1/22, 7:43 AM
I was so hoping Dusty would take the initiative (pun intended) with those orders and give himself some leverage. Hmm. The plot definitely has thickened like Dusty and Rusty's meat. Looking forward to where things head from here. Such a hot story with all the dynamics.

8/2/22, 12:40 AM
@Evan Thanks!
8/1/22, 1:52 AM
Love it. Don't even care that rusty is winning.

8/2/22, 12:35 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thanks!