Recent Comments

Anon
7/31/22, 7:52 PM
The antagonist falling for his own powers is always such a hot plot twist. God bless you

8/2/22, 12:35 AM
@Anon Thanks! You might like "The Cook-off" if you like that dynamic.
SPhoton
7/31/22, 12:21 PM
You're one of my top three authors on this site and I'm always so happy to see when you have a new story or a new chapter of something existing pop up. Keep up the fantastic work!!!

8/2/22, 12:33 AM
@SPhoton Oh wow, thanks! I'm hoping getting this story out of my queue for the time being will free up the brain space I need to finish some other stuff.
Anonymous
7/30/22, 11:51 PM
This is so insanely hot. I love to see the absolute corruption of protagonists, and having the bad guys win. Wherever this story goes from here, it's already solidified itself as one of my favorite stories on this site! Everything you write is incredible, keep up the amazing work!

8/2/22, 12:32 AM
@ Thanks! I pushed myself to write some kinks I haven't really written before.
7/30/22, 10:57 PM
… I loved it. I love the bad guy winning but I also love a good turn about / flipping the table story. This had both: Rusty is a jerk and is winning, and then Dusty flips the tables and is the one winning, even though he’s basically a hotter clone of Rusty. So the bad guy wins. I loved so many things about this. The himbo/dumber thing is really hot for me. Rusty’s dick getting bigger is hot. Carter’s spell casting is hot. So much more, but this covers a bit of it. Also, overall, I love the RPG vibe and the setting being a con and Carter not liking and bucking the stereotype of a jock himbo (and Rusty forcing him into it anyways). Super hot and super fun to read.

8/2/22, 12:27 AM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks! I like reading squirmy stuff, but it's harder for me to write, so I'm glad this worked for people! Thanks for help with editing/feedback on this one.
7/30/22, 10:22 PM
Well, that was more gut-wrenching rather than hot. Probably how I felt like he did, reading the whole thing through a negative lens when things seem pretty hopeless. The ending left Carter with an option, in the end, allowing him to choose a better fate if he so wishes but it's probably not guaranteed. Hopefully Dusty could at least get Carter some well-deserved revenge, even if he does end up loving being a subby jock in personality.

8/2/22, 12:26 AM
@ChronoSeth I don't know exactly what the next installment is going to hold, but there will definitely be shakeups. I just want to take some time to work on other stories I've been neglecting before I get back to this.
Tanner
8/1/22, 8:35 PM
This story is really incredible. Thank you so much for writing it and please keep going!
8/1/22, 4:19 PM
Thanks for the comments, everybody! Just to clarify, I do have ideas where the story potentially goes from here, I'm just a bit burnt out and needed a stopping point to take a breather and spend some time on other WIPs. The next bit (tentatively titled "The Con: Chronicles of Pornia") will be about the same characters.

8/1/22, 6:15 PM
@bluesuedewho Okay this title is amazing. Take all the time you need of course. As much as I want to read the next installment, mental health is more important
8/1/22, 1:39 PM
Am I the only one who wishes James won?
7/31/22, 11:43 PM
what a pleasant surprise, i didn't expect to see your writing here Rand

8/1/22, 1:19 PM
Figured it would be cool to have here plus spreads more about Blazingcheeks @BigMetalHusband
Cheese
8/1/22, 12:11 PM
Gosh, I kinda wish that'd happen to me