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easdf
8/1/22, 8:53 AM
I would be totally fine if Carter would have ended up loving to bottom and wanting to be bred, but leaving him dumb (and well, being unable to think barely at all can be considered that in my opinion) is just depressing. Throughout the whole story we saw how Carter didn't deserve any of this. At the beginning he had every right to say no to bottoming, and we can see that even at the top of his mental transformation, what he feared the most is being dumb, so leaving him that way feels uncalled for. Technically we can believe that Dusty would change it, but since we are told they would probably have the same skill, that Carter still yearns to be bred and that he doesn't have the mental capabilities to think about an idea in time, the chances of him regaining his wits and brain are bleak.

8/2/22, 12:49 AM
@easdf Thanks for reading! The story isn't over, just at a natural stopping point for me. I have ideas for playing around with brain stuff whenever I continue this.
8/1/22, 10:34 AM
I loved the story but I’m unsure about the ending. I wasn’t a big dusty fan and I wanted Rusty to dominate Carter and win but overall it was still a great story!

8/2/22, 12:47 AM
@ls1999 Thanks!
8/1/22, 4:35 AM
Hm. I'll keep checking these out as they come to see if the dynamic changes, but honestly I really won't enjoy this series until poor Carter is restored (at least partially). I think this story has an unusual problem I don't often find when reading stories on this site, which is that you actually did such a good job of making me care about the protagonist (and hating Rusty) that it's hurting the enjoyment in the end. Even if Rusty is punished by his duplicate, an unrestored Carter is just...depressing, not hot. Sorry to be a negative Nancy. Maybe your plan for future instalments involves a happy ending for Carter (and not just "I'm a dumb himbo and lost all my original personality but I'm happy" kind of "happy" ending), but until I see a true hint of that, I'm personally not gonna be a satisfied reader. But considering other people are enjoying it, that might just be my hangup. Which is totally fine! Every story on this site shouldn't be for everyone, so maybe this one just is not for people like me.

easdf
8/1/22, 8:47 AM
@AnonDragon Couldn't put it better myself

8/2/22, 12:46 AM
@AnonDragon I have big shakeups in mind, but I also desperately need to take a break from this story for a bit. I have other WIPs piling up. I'll probably do the same semi-interactive thing, but my broad plan for the characters is something a bit more involved than Carter ending up just a dumb jock or restored to exactly what he was before meeting Rusty.
Evan
8/1/22, 7:43 AM
I was so hoping Dusty would take the initiative (pun intended) with those orders and give himself some leverage. Hmm. The plot definitely has thickened like Dusty and Rusty's meat. Looking forward to where things head from here. Such a hot story with all the dynamics.

8/2/22, 12:40 AM
@Evan Thanks!
8/1/22, 1:52 AM
Love it. Don't even care that rusty is winning.

8/2/22, 12:35 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thanks!
Anon
7/31/22, 7:52 PM
The antagonist falling for his own powers is always such a hot plot twist. God bless you

8/2/22, 12:35 AM
@Anon Thanks! You might like "The Cook-off" if you like that dynamic.
SPhoton
7/31/22, 12:21 PM
You're one of my top three authors on this site and I'm always so happy to see when you have a new story or a new chapter of something existing pop up. Keep up the fantastic work!!!

8/2/22, 12:33 AM
@SPhoton Oh wow, thanks! I'm hoping getting this story out of my queue for the time being will free up the brain space I need to finish some other stuff.
Anonymous
7/30/22, 11:51 PM
This is so insanely hot. I love to see the absolute corruption of protagonists, and having the bad guys win. Wherever this story goes from here, it's already solidified itself as one of my favorite stories on this site! Everything you write is incredible, keep up the amazing work!

8/2/22, 12:32 AM
@ Thanks! I pushed myself to write some kinks I haven't really written before.
7/30/22, 10:57 PM
… I loved it. I love the bad guy winning but I also love a good turn about / flipping the table story. This had both: Rusty is a jerk and is winning, and then Dusty flips the tables and is the one winning, even though he’s basically a hotter clone of Rusty. So the bad guy wins. I loved so many things about this. The himbo/dumber thing is really hot for me. Rusty’s dick getting bigger is hot. Carter’s spell casting is hot. So much more, but this covers a bit of it. Also, overall, I love the RPG vibe and the setting being a con and Carter not liking and bucking the stereotype of a jock himbo (and Rusty forcing him into it anyways). Super hot and super fun to read.

8/2/22, 12:27 AM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks! I like reading squirmy stuff, but it's harder for me to write, so I'm glad this worked for people! Thanks for help with editing/feedback on this one.
7/30/22, 10:22 PM
Well, that was more gut-wrenching rather than hot. Probably how I felt like he did, reading the whole thing through a negative lens when things seem pretty hopeless. The ending left Carter with an option, in the end, allowing him to choose a better fate if he so wishes but it's probably not guaranteed. Hopefully Dusty could at least get Carter some well-deserved revenge, even if he does end up loving being a subby jock in personality.

8/2/22, 12:26 AM
@ChronoSeth I don't know exactly what the next installment is going to hold, but there will definitely be shakeups. I just want to take some time to work on other stories I've been neglecting before I get back to this.