Recent Comments

7/30/22, 10:57 PM
… I loved it. I love the bad guy winning but I also love a good turn about / flipping the table story. This had both: Rusty is a jerk and is winning, and then Dusty flips the tables and is the one winning, even though he’s basically a hotter clone of Rusty. So the bad guy wins. I loved so many things about this. The himbo/dumber thing is really hot for me. Rusty’s dick getting bigger is hot. Carter’s spell casting is hot. So much more, but this covers a bit of it. Also, overall, I love the RPG vibe and the setting being a con and Carter not liking and bucking the stereotype of a jock himbo (and Rusty forcing him into it anyways). Super hot and super fun to read.

8/2/22, 12:27 AM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks! I like reading squirmy stuff, but it's harder for me to write, so I'm glad this worked for people! Thanks for help with editing/feedback on this one.
7/30/22, 10:22 PM
Well, that was more gut-wrenching rather than hot. Probably how I felt like he did, reading the whole thing through a negative lens when things seem pretty hopeless. The ending left Carter with an option, in the end, allowing him to choose a better fate if he so wishes but it's probably not guaranteed. Hopefully Dusty could at least get Carter some well-deserved revenge, even if he does end up loving being a subby jock in personality.

8/2/22, 12:26 AM
@ChronoSeth I don't know exactly what the next installment is going to hold, but there will definitely be shakeups. I just want to take some time to work on other stories I've been neglecting before I get back to this.
Tanner
8/1/22, 8:35 PM
This story is really incredible. Thank you so much for writing it and please keep going!
8/1/22, 4:19 PM
Thanks for the comments, everybody! Just to clarify, I do have ideas where the story potentially goes from here, I'm just a bit burnt out and needed a stopping point to take a breather and spend some time on other WIPs. The next bit (tentatively titled "The Con: Chronicles of Pornia") will be about the same characters.

8/1/22, 6:15 PM
@bluesuedewho Okay this title is amazing. Take all the time you need of course. As much as I want to read the next installment, mental health is more important
8/1/22, 1:39 PM
Am I the only one who wishes James won?
7/31/22, 11:43 PM
what a pleasant surprise, i didn't expect to see your writing here Rand

8/1/22, 1:19 PM
Figured it would be cool to have here plus spreads more about Blazingcheeks @BigMetalHusband
Cheese
8/1/22, 12:11 PM
Gosh, I kinda wish that'd happen to me
8/1/22, 11:40 AM
Oh man, that was an awesome start. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Cheese
8/1/22, 11:30 AM
Yoooo, I want the potion that gives you instant video game knowledge 👀 There's so many games on my backlog I haven't had time to play yet and something like that would make me feel as though I've already played them XD
easdf
7/31/22, 7:22 PM
That was very interesting! I can't wait to see where it's going next and if Zane's hubris will indeed be his fall.

8/1/22, 10:56 AM
@easdf I am hopeful that the ending will be what is hoped for.