Recent Comments

Evan
7/31/22, 5:17 AM
Outstanding chapter. So much good stuff here. I thought Dick was going to work it out but, alas, his repressed nature is his undoing as 'Tim' helps him embrace feeling good.

7/31/22, 5:27 AM
@Evan thanks man, am glad you're liking it!
7/31/22, 4:13 AM
Amazing! As always, incredibly hot, and the fact that Tim and Conner wake up only to realize the truly always wanted to go at each other, was perfect. As for Dick, I thought it was brilliant how he was caught by his need to expose himself, to be desired, and how making him think of himself as hot was the stepping stone to see Tim and Roy as hot. Fantastic job Jack, keep bringing our boys in line and I'll be here to read.

7/31/22, 4:17 AM
@Essex Thanks man, I like trying to find that unique chink in character's armor that would lead them off the path, glad you're liking it!
rwriter51
7/31/22, 3:45 AM
This has always been one of my favorite stories. I can't remember when or where I first read it, but I always gravitate back to it wherever it shows up.
7/31/22, 12:37 AM
Another well-written masterpiece! This was so sweet and so very sexy! Maybe it’s the Trek fan in me, but I relish the day we can meet and fuck the Aliens that share our universe haha

7/31/22, 3:25 AM
@BeefyCub Thank you so much! My first alien story.
7/31/22, 3:20 AM
Wow, the p[lot thickens and the threat feels closer than ever. I love how the foursome works, how each has their role for Matt and how in sync they all are. I'm sure trouble is coming soon, and I'll be here to root for Matt and his guys!
6/24/22, 12:17 PM
I really liked the way you described Axel's mental transformation, and I think a lot of the scenes with him (and Rodrigo and Jaime) in the cages are extremely hot. However, I could have done without the scenes with the wives, which focused a little too much on the women's trauma and also made it harder to suspend disbelief about this mysterious DILF-abducting organization. (Wouldn't the wives get suspicious when their kidnapped husbands are suddenly returned to them, transformed into gay daddies?)

6/24/22, 5:00 PM
@Hypnothrill Thank you! When you flip from cougars to dilfs, a cuckold scene becomes something dark. The original ended at that scene but after reversing genders, it needed a softer landing. I focused on the religion aspect throughout so instead of gratuitous trauma it could be read as the complete corruption of the mc's once strong faith. I've enjoyed many of your stories. Thanks for the comment.

7/30/22, 10:08 PM
@retread Whatever the case this setup and followthrough, even with a base is excellent, looking forward to more from you in the future
7/30/22, 6:39 PM
How do you manage o make steamy sex just so… adorable?

7/30/22, 9:43 PM
@Yunnick It's all about the dialogue, heh, in my opinion. I'm grateful for the Coming of Age category—there's so much beauty in a first time! And so much room for both cuteness and hotness.
7/30/22, 8:38 PM
And here I thought that jock was going to become the key holder and take control.
Anonymous
7/30/22, 8:31 PM
Oh my gosh! This story has me on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait to see what happens next…
Anonymous
7/30/22, 8:01 PM
What an incredible first chapter, can’t wait to read more!