Recent Comments

7/30/22, 2:15 PM
WOW… brilliant as always! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
7/30/22, 1:42 PM
I really love the way you write the story !!!! :heart_eyes:
Evan
7/30/22, 12:03 PM
I did not put the Q together. Well-spotted, Time. Really love the lore expansion and what a fun experience to have it done in the past with our knowing where things are heading. Not all the things, but some. The alteration of the bodies is surprising and fantastic.
7/30/22, 3:58 AM
A real game-changer of a chapter! Can't wait to see what else Sam gets up to with the others around!

7/30/22, 11:55 AM
@time.to.occur Glad you liked it! Up until now, even through the Thyjar's influence, William has been keeping things pretty low-key and tame. He's still been thinking of "what comes after this" and going back to his old life without a bunch of missing people cases leading back to his door. And, for its part, the Thyjar has been all for this since it senses that that would be dangerous for it too. Sam, though, has semi-unknowingly convinced the Thyjar that it doesn't need to play its hand so passively. The best defense is a good offence! What does that mean for the other guys and William? We'll see soon!
R P
7/30/22, 11:46 AM
Hot start! Also, Freddy fantasising about buying brie is both hilarious and weirdly relatable.
7/30/22, 6:35 AM
Love the dark turn. Would have loved to see a bit more struggle from Harry the goody two shoes before his mindless obedience but hey you are the author. Looking forward to more.

7/30/22, 11:44 AM
@Mrdick Thanks for the feedback and support! Yeah, sorry, I was really torn between making Harry's conversion slow and painful and making it a show of how much power the Thyjar could have over the guys with Sam's ruthlessness in charge. I started feeling unwell near the end of writing and ended up posting earlier than I should have. I'm thinking of editing later to flesh things out when I feel more human again, but I'll also say that Harry isn't completely gone yet; Sam's too cruel for that.
7/30/22, 11:31 AM
Okay at first I was ticked because I thought he apparated inside the school grounds, but that ending. Sexy and still damn good cannon material. Bravo sir.
Cheese
7/30/22, 7:29 AM
Nooooo, Brandon and Graham were so close to escaping Gosh, this story's written really well, but maybe it's not for me, I just felt really bad watching everyone get sucked into a cult
Cheese
7/30/22, 7:20 AM
I feel so bad for Brandon, everyone's just turning into football zombies If I were him I'd run out of that apartment as fast as I could and find somewhere to hide (...or maybe watch the game on purpose)
7/30/22, 6:55 AM
I’d love to see a continuation of this! Such a hot story.