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7/29/22, 4:25 PM
Great stories for Cliff and Jessica. Would be great to see the story from Vin's side? Always curious for the thoughts of a muscled man changed into a gay sub.

Willie Cici
7/30/22, 2:36 AM
@uniform53 That's in the first installment.
7/30/22, 1:18 AM
Great start to the story! Can't wait to hear about their future wishes.
BRD
7/30/22, 12:57 AM
Great start to this series! Can't wait to read more.
Anonymous
7/29/22, 1:35 PM
I know this is a fantasy and all but Zane is a real douchebag. Some of his changes are for the good, but mostly he seems drunk of power and enjoys inflicting mental pain on his family members.

7/29/22, 5:15 PM
Oh you are right, but it makes you wonder what happens to Zane later.

Anonymous
7/29/22, 11:28 PM
@Drake Nightstorm Oh, that was true before, but after reading your comment I'm even more hooked >:)
Good boy
7/29/22, 10:01 PM
Is that what happened to me?

7/29/22, 10:03 PM
@Good boy hmm, are you fucking your roommate on command? When your roommate says "who's a good boy, who's a big strong top?" are you going "woof woof I am!" and then fucking harder? 😉
Robert
7/29/22, 8:27 PM
If a cop trusts you, they make their feelings known
7/29/22, 8:10 PM
Great start. Really hot already, although I love biceps so I’m not exactly unbiased. Feels like it has lots of opportunity for more sexiness, and it’s a set up that lends itself to changes not being mean. The bit of foreshadowing at the end of chapter 1 when he thinks it’s good that wishes can’t be made that aren’t good for both of them is great. Perfect little tease of things to come. Oh, the introduction of the wishing rock is great too. “It must be from some alternate reality aunt or something.” Makes me think of “it must be some kind of… hot tub time machine.” Basically, here’s the device, do you really care how it got here? No? Ok let’s move onto the hot wishes. I already love this and can’t wait for more.
7/29/22, 7:22 PM
For what it's worth I like that Felix has a micro! They deserve love and attention and the idea that the jock bully is now servicing the nerd is very cute. Great scene!
7/28/22, 11:21 AM
This series keep getting better and better. I love that this becoming a journey of sexual self-discovery, and not some Darwinian view of sexuality. There’s both the wonder of opening up your mind and the sheer mysticism of sexual power all wrapped-up in such powerful physicality. Thanks for this well-written journey you’re gifting us!

7/28/22, 4:13 PM
Thank you! I am so proud of the eroticism I was able to accomplish with this chapter. Blending the physical and the spiritual and trying to make it hot was a challenge I’m glad I took. I’m curious what you mean by a Darwinian view of sexuality—what were you originally expecting, or could you elaborate on the contrast between what I’m doing and the Darwinian thing? @Yunnick

7/29/22, 7:15 AM
@Soren Fitz Hard to explain. Sometimes in some stories you get a sense that sexuality is a curse, like being a bottom is being at the bottom of a pre-ordained, rigid hierarchy in sexual roles, and that there is no fluidity in sex at all. And that’s a worldview I don’t quite like. You’re on the contrary feels to me like a story of discovering and exploring your deep desires in spite of socially-constructed norms, in that wonderful universe you’re creating, and I’m digging this. (I hope this makes sense)

7/29/22, 4:17 PM
@Yunnick It makes perfect sense! You hit the nail on the head, honestly. I love subverting traditional sexual norms through characters who buck them—in this case, Talley faces off against a norm he created himself. It’s also why I use top-to-switch and not top-to-bottom (although I probably should add both for people who read those stories). I hope the last chapter is a satisfying end to Talley’s journey! And if you want another story in this universe you might want to check out The Prince and the Frat Boys.

7/29/22, 7:20 PM
@Soren Fitz Really looking forward to the the final chapter(s)!
7/29/22, 4:07 PM
I want more!

Rub.berized
7/29/22, 6:31 PM
@Marik29 there will be more