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2/2/26, 9:35 PM
Would love more from this series!
2/2/26, 7:25 PM
Thank you! It was so long ago that I wrote it, I'm amazed when people find it again.
1/29/26, 10:10 PM
Please don't delay...

Michael Hogwarts
1/30/26, 2:57 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) promise I am working on it hard ! anything you wanna see ? I am always down for ideas

2/2/26, 7:07 PM
@Michael Hogwarts Will there be more interaction with marines of lower rank than the sergeant? Perhaps someone will blackmail him into becoming their property, or maybe even use and exploit him?
2/2/26, 6:50 PM
This is an amazing story. Great details and nice lead up.
Anonymous
2/2/26, 6:17 PM
This was so hot and funny
2/2/26, 5:26 PM
Hope more chapters are in the works
2/2/26, 3:08 PM
So hot! Looking forward next chapter!
2/2/26, 3:03 PM
I love the man COLT... he is so powerfully "working" for me. I love his ability to lure Charlie into his place. THANK YOU for all the references to the smells... it is so captivating to me. I LOVE IT
2/2/26, 1:12 PM
Looking forward to men-only night at the gym!

2/2/26, 2:44 PM
@[ZacTheFac](/user/show/948203) There will be more than muscle on display 💪🏻😈
Anon
2/1/26, 4:17 AM
ya gotta direct the AI better, dude. i work with it a lot and i can tell it's starting to fall apart. some directions that help: don't use sentence fragments, don't use similes (AI is notoriously bad at them), focus on descriptions, don't use the word 'deliberate' (this one i've noticed pops up a lot in AI work for some reason, especially nsfw stuff). also be sure you're describing exactly what you want to happen in a story when you command the AI: "write 500 words about Liam and Noah working out at the gym. Noah mentions his cousin will be joining them at a party later that week and Liam is nervous. Noah convinces him by guilt tripping and hazing him, reminding him to 'be cool' and 'not be weird about it'." AI will follow a blueprint fairly accurately and expand on stuff you feel you can't (though human writing is superior). anyway your idea is still really solid. its taking a long time to get to the romance, if that's the intended outcome, and a long time to step forward in the sexy department. Feels like sometimes you repeat chapters just with a different flavor. i really liked the wind up in the earlier chapters and these middle ones have kind of stagnated and circled around each other a lot. Might be the AI's fault, at least partially.

2/1/26, 5:05 PM
@Anon at that point, why not just actually write the damn thing yourself?

twistup
2/2/26, 2:34 PM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) it's the diff between writing 200 words of commands versus 3000 words of actual writing. Human writing is better, AI is just easier and faster for some people.