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7/29/22, 4:07 PM
I want more!

Rub.berized
7/29/22, 6:31 PM
@Marik29 there will be more
7/29/22, 6:14 PM
oh wow, i really really enjoyed this
7/28/22, 3:48 PM
So atmospheric. Great character development. Such excellent building of erotic energy. No notes.

7/29/22, 4:18 PM
@Noam de Pluma I’m really happy with the build-up here. For not being a non-stop sex scene like the last one, I think it still holds the homoeroticism close while making room for a lot of story. And the atmosphere was my favourite thing to pull off here.
7/5/22, 1:22 PM
Okay, so I have been thinking. Since almost everyone hates Rusty (as we should), I think it would be cool if Dusty will become loveable and heroic (maybe even ending up with Carter). It will show that Rusty had the capability to be loved but in his action he both ruined himself and created the one who would surpass him and "get the guy" instead of him, cementing the realization that if only he would have been nicer or more moral/caring/however you want to call it

7/29/22, 12:40 PM
@Reader Dusty is literally the same person as Rusty though. Like the only difference they currently have after Rusty upped his stats is that Dusty is subby.
R P
7/3/22, 2:44 AM
I vote Custom Special Ability. I’m still rooting for Dusty to come out on top, and I’m sure he has some great suggestions for what spells Carter could cast to make the scene hotter (and make sure it’s filmed from a dom/top perspective 😉) This another great chapter, seeing Carter get in to bottoming is very hot. Even if I don’t want him to be stuck as a dumb jock forever, it’s fun for the moment.

7/5/22, 1:35 AM
@R P Thanks! I wonder if I made Carter too likable by accident... I just wanted to do something other than the classic "homophobe jock gets turned out" but I may have created a monster.

R P
7/5/22, 6:49 AM
@bluesuedewho Haha! Subby Carter is a lot of fun, but he is so likeable (and Rusty is such a dick) that it feels bad to let Rusty have it all go his way. I think Dusty shows that Rusty has potential to be a more likeable dom, and it’d be fun to see Rusty tricked into some personality changes of his own.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:17 PM
@bluesuedewho I'll tell you what, I think the issue lies in two points: 1. Carter didn't do anything to deserve to be punished; his wishes are completely reasonable and he has been nice and considerate, so being used by rusty (pun intended) feels unfair and we root for him. Also Rusty's a dick 2. I think that dumbing down is a less popular fetish as it seems. If I try to put my finger on it, in my own personal opinion, it's because dumbing down is effecting both the character's personality and their agency. These stakes combining what I said on point 1, makes the protagonist-villain contrast more polarized. Having said all that, I don't think this is necessarily a bad thing. High stakes are suspenseful and even though it is less my thing I can't wait to see what happens next. It only means that people want Carter to come out on top (and safe) and to Rusty paying his price.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:17 PM
@easdf Wow, this ended up way longer than I intended

7/29/22, 12:39 PM
@easdf My problem with #1 is that like, almost no one deserves something like MC to happen them in real life. It would be the worst thing to ever happen to you. When people try to moralize in MC story it is an immediate turn off like "okay dude I get it, you didn't think the moral implications through and thought that one guy being kinda homophobic is on the same level as being stripped of your will and personality. Call me when you can just focus on writing a hot story." Like anyone who would do MC is a dick. Whether a story acknowledges it or not, it is an immutable fact.
Anonymous
7/29/22, 11:59 AM
Butt plugs that leave you irritated when they're removed so as to force you quickly back into your rubber? How do you come up with such wonderful things? 🤤

Rub.berized
7/29/22, 12:06 PM
Let's say, in my head I'm kinkier than I think myself
Anonymous
7/28/22, 1:22 PM
If you ever feel like writing a "What if?" where Trevor wins, Id love to read it!

7/28/22, 11:18 PM
😯

7/28/22, 11:23 PM
@Gay Chaste I did write a "What If" for *Two Tops make a Bottom* where Mr Booker wins, for commission. But I'm unsure if I'll publish it. Not sure my readers could stand a multiverse where in one of them, Marcus, Xavier and Darius all end up as sex slaves.

7/29/22, 12:33 AM
@GoonNoob I would definitely want one where booker wins

7/29/22, 12:04 PM
Yeah me too :) @Lighthouse
7/29/22, 11:08 AM
Do Jason next who’s searching for percy and falls into trap
7/29/22, 6:41 AM
wow another great chapter they are progressing well into rubber drones - question is what happened to the other one that was taken aside?

Rub.berized
7/29/22, 9:32 AM
@MalSkinwait for the next chapter. Should get approved today. I'm not yet sure when I introduce him back to the story but I'm certain I'll introduce him back to he group soon. But just in a better, way more compliant way.
7/29/22, 8:05 AM
Simply proof reading these stories once or twice would really help a lot to keep the reader in the "universe" of the story. Fixing simple typos, grammar, run on sentences, etc... I'm still waiting to find out what Kyle does to Brady next!!! Creative idea to rewrite his series and serialize it. Not bad writing and descriptions but are they the original authors or this ones? Oh well enjoy it for it's worth I guess?