Recent Comments

7/29/22, 8:05 AM
Simply proof reading these stories once or twice would really help a lot to keep the reader in the "universe" of the story. Fixing simple typos, grammar, run on sentences, etc... I'm still waiting to find out what Kyle does to Brady next!!! Creative idea to rewrite his series and serialize it. Not bad writing and descriptions but are they the original authors or this ones? Oh well enjoy it for it's worth I guess?
7/28/22, 7:45 PM
Yep this is hot. Looking forward to more!

7/29/22, 6:31 AM
@Mrdick Thank you, kind words always appreciated, (nice handle, by the way). Chapter three has been drafted but I'm about to leave for work and am out this evening so I'll do my proof-reading tomorrow morning and look to submit for publication tomorrow. Hope you continue to enjoy the series
7/29/22, 4:21 AM
Fantastic!! Please continue!!
7/29/22, 4:10 AM
Sounds like a great deal. Send him to me if he needs more inches.
Anonymous
7/29/22, 3:37 AM
Only you @williecici can LITERALLY make me salivate looking forward to the NEXT chapter of your story. I'm HUGE fan.
7/28/22, 5:22 AM
I have a question, last chapter Zane's cock was 10 inches, and on this chapter it's 8 inches, is it a side effect made on purpose or perhaps a detail that slipped out?

7/28/22, 5:25 PM
@Kristalmaster Thank you for pointing that out. With two people writing it this was probably an error.

7/28/22, 5:27 PM
@Drake Nightstorm Thanks to you for writing this amazing story!

7/29/22, 2:15 AM
@Kristalmaster you are welcome and I went back to fix the error.
Anonymous
7/29/22, 2:00 AM
Incredible!!!!
7/28/22, 11:14 PM
I hope they use more than the handcuffs. His dad had a whole set of toys and gear.
Anonymous
7/28/22, 10:43 PM
Damn, this was hot, more please!
WillingSoldier
7/28/22, 9:52 PM
I'm loving this. When will it continue?