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7/29/22, 4:10 AM
Sounds like a great deal. Send him to me if he needs more inches.
Anonymous
7/29/22, 3:37 AM
Only you @williecici can LITERALLY make me salivate looking forward to the NEXT chapter of your story. I'm HUGE fan.
7/28/22, 5:22 AM
I have a question, last chapter Zane's cock was 10 inches, and on this chapter it's 8 inches, is it a side effect made on purpose or perhaps a detail that slipped out?

7/28/22, 5:25 PM
@Kristalmaster Thank you for pointing that out. With two people writing it this was probably an error.

7/28/22, 5:27 PM
@Drake Nightstorm Thanks to you for writing this amazing story!

7/29/22, 2:15 AM
@Kristalmaster you are welcome and I went back to fix the error.
Anonymous
7/29/22, 2:00 AM
Incredible!!!!
7/28/22, 11:14 PM
I hope they use more than the handcuffs. His dad had a whole set of toys and gear.
Anonymous
7/28/22, 10:43 PM
Damn, this was hot, more please!
WillingSoldier
7/28/22, 9:52 PM
I'm loving this. When will it continue?
7/28/22, 9:14 PM
Chapter two was good, really loved the hypno-duel. Wonder what would happen if there was a draw.
7/28/22, 3:14 PM
I really love how immersed we get in Talley’s POV. The insight we get into his thoughts, feelings, and overwhelm in the moment is fantastic. Plus it’s a super-hot (non-stop) sex scene, and you handle the pacing really well. Great work!

7/28/22, 7:26 PM
@Noam de Pluma I felt that work on this story really helped me improve my ability to flesh out a character into a whole, immersive person. I think it paid off with Axel and Tao in _Curse of the Werebull_, but I still have more work to do. I'm also glad my non-stop sex remains hot, haha, I strive for edging a _little_ more than climaxing but I can usually rub one out to my scenes at certain spots.
7/28/22, 7:26 PM
The plot thiccens and the Don got a new toy. Perfect